Ghost Gate Coffin

The only thing that displeased me about this book is that the granddaughter of a veteran is used as a plot driver. She is humiliated, jumps off a building, and has a gangster cleaning up the traces. The author may think that the protagonist defeats the last gangster and redresses the grievances of the veteran. Why did the bloody veteran end up in such an old age? The starting point was bad. Thinking about it makes me feel sick and disgusted... I have only read less than forty chapters. Sorry, I really can't accept making an issue about a veteran named "Lin Yuanchao" and using his tragic old age to highlight the protagonist.

Can you please stop writing about the daily life of men and women? Isn't this an urban supernatural novel? Don't write any more mindless love chapters. It was originally a good book that could be highly rated. It looks like a love novel. Change the love chapters to include more battle chapters. In terms of details, this book can be improved to a higher level. The battle scenes in many chapters are ended hastily, and the protagonist has obviously learned so many spells and skills. Why is it that every battle is either Sky God Strike or Bachan, Fufa is always the Thunder Fire Talisman, and the other talismans are gone?

The selected themes and entry points are quite good, and the writing style is also okay, but it feels a bit slow-paced, and the subsequent plots can be connected in series. But, the protagonist is passively involved and has no intention of actively advancing the plot. As for the plot of chapters 46-101 (just see chapter 101), the plot is advanced based on Chen Kexin's jumping off the building. At the beginning, the third uncle reminded him not to get involved in this matter. The male protagonist passively went to the place where he jumped from the building and entered the virtual realm. Then in chapter 64 I had to hand over the file to Xing Weidong (I got information that the place had been infiltrated into a sieve, and there were very few people who could trust this information). When I met him later, there was no mention of handing this thing to Xing Weidong (maybe I missed it). I still ignored the injustice, and then had an ambiguous daily life with Sister Hua Ling and Lu Li, and did not pursue the case. It gives people the impression that they are just ordinary people, so there is no problem here. Then Chapter 90-100 is connected to the plot involved in the previous copy. After seeing the content of the video, I feel uneasy. You didn't care about Chen Kexin jumping off the building earlier. You won't be calm about the same thing. Since you don't want to take care of it, you should let it go, or send a report anonymously to a higher level place. But I didn't plan to take the initiative to report to the local area and hand over the evidence to the police. After all, I was young and believed that the police would have no problem. However, I was a local dignitary. I knew that the system was already a collusion between government and businessmen, and that special departments had been infiltrated into sieves. There was also the black machine known as the scavenger. Even the people from the special department who went to the local area to investigate the case were killed. The local area was no longer as dark as usual. They still believed it and went to the police. They framed them back up and almost went to jail. Then they met the perpetrators who were on the loose. They felt uneasy. Then they killed people and asked people to collect the bodies. Then they found that the bodies were missing. , At this time, you should have realized that something was wrong, and then someone spread the video to cause public outrage, and then planned to cause a natural disaster. Moreover, in the later stages of the two dungeons, it was prompted that someone was playing a game, both related to himself, and the layout had been planned for a long time. The protagonist has not realized the problem yet, and his growth is a bit slow. Then the author may want to write about the value of that little bit of light in a dark society, but from beginning to end I didn't see who was that little bit of light. The special department was abolished from the beginning, the small investigators were powerless, there was a traitor at the top, and the new boss of the special department was more like someone who came to wipe the ass. Is delayed justice still justice? The protagonist is passively involved from the beginning to the end, forced to observe. I don't see where the protagonist shines, and I don't know what he is going to do. Even if he wants to find out why his family has become like this, and why his parents are missing, there are so many mysteries and nothing is being found, so it feels very disconnected to me.

How come the author is getting worse and worse as he writes? The first few books were so good that they were soon to be released. I thought the author could write better and better! As a result, the good aspects were lost, and the bad aspects were promoted!

Pig's Foot will always experience the dungeon with a player's mentality. The key point is to reflect the player's mentality. I am Pig's Foot and will never die, get hurt, or get into trouble. You can collapse it however you want, ghosts are just NPCs.

The protagonist is Shina. I can understand that you want to write it well, but the plot can only be said to advance a bit.

Can the main character not be like a retarded supporting character, with zero IQ and no luck at all?

The protagonist has no IQ, just like eating spoiled food

The front looks okay, but the back is a mess. The main character has a low IQ and no abilities. It's not interesting.

Stupid pig's feet, I can't stand it, no wonder there are so few comments