Da Qin: Invite the First Emperor to Rebel at the Beginning
by Han Mumu
About This Novel
Reborn in the Qin Dynasty, in order to stop Liu Bang in the troubled times at the end of Qin, he sat on the throne of Han Dynasty. Zhao Yuan smelted steel and forged armaments, and gathered grain and talents in Guangtun. Three years later, the military base was built, and Zhao Yuan led 3,000 elite troops to wait patiently for the opportunity to rebel. Unexpectedly, Qin Shihuang and General Wang Ben secretly visited Zhao Yuan, and were recruited as retainers by Zhao Yuan. When tens of thousands of Qin warriors surrounded Zhao Yuan's manor, Zhao Yuan panicked. Who the hell is betraying me! Zhao Zheng: Let me show my cards. I, Qin Shihuang, am you the one who wants to rebel? Wang Ben: I don't pretend anymore. I am Tong Wuhou. Are you the one who wants to rebel against the Qin Dynasty? Zhao Yuan: The conscience of heaven and earth, I really don't want to rebel against Da Qin!
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Official(40)Scraped 5d ago
Plagiarize it
I found a book on the Internet with a similar name to this book. That book is called The Gambit Invites Zulong to Rebellion. It has been updated to almost 400 chapters. I looked at the table of contents and found that it is similar to this book. Wow, awesome. I understand everything.
I just finished reading the first few chapters and I think they are good. But I would like to offer some comments of my own.
First, calling Ying Zheng Lao Zhao is a bit awkward, but this is just my own feeling and nothing serious. The second thing is that I think Zhao Yuan told so many important inside stories to two people who had just met. He revealed too much information without knowing the other person's talents, background, and purpose, and the pace was too fast. The third is that as the majestic Qin Shihuang, he did not look like an emperor at all in the previous chapters and was a bit too approachable. Zhao Yuan said in front of Qin Shihuang that the Great Wall was not good. He was too hasty and would definitely trigger a rebellion. Qin Shihuang, on the other hand, was just like a student attending a lecture. He was not angry at all and did not refute at all. As an emperor, he can't have such a good temper. Although Qin Shihuang could understand it and knew that what he said was reasonable, he had no words to defend himself and it was not practical. Also, Qin Shihuang believed whatever Zhao Yuan said. Zhao Yuan said that the elixir was poisonous, and Qin Shihuang immediately believed it without any doubt. If Qin Shihuang said that Qin Shihuang could live for five or six years, could Qin Shihuang also believe it? It doesn't make sense. Personally speaking, this Qin Shihuang is nothing like the Qin Shihuang who could sweep the six countries and unify the world. He feels like a passer-by who has become wise. Of course, these are just some of my suggestions.
The quality of this novel is okay, but there is one point that makes me a little angry.
Take the content of 60 and 61 as an example. The content of the previous one and the next one are a bit inconsistent. How much space is there in between? How come you find out that you don't know how to deal with it, so you jump directly to the court. Read it yourself. The author found the 60 and 61 photos yourself. Can you read them clearly? There is no middle process between the two.
The chapters are too confusing
@author The chapters are so messy. I don't want to read them. Please hurry up and correct them. What did the editor think that made you mess around like this? @Editor
Another piece of writing that is not even as good as writing on paper. You haven't even tried at all. How can you fight the Huns without building the Great Wall? Only with the Great Wall can you have the ability to send troops. Without the Great Wall, you would always be passively beaten. If the Huns don't fight with your army, they can just burn, kill and loot. How can you pursue them? You will always be beaten by the majority. If you send out 100,000 troops, the Huns will not fight you. If you divide your troops into 10, the Huns will still not fight you. Are you dividing your troops? Scouts will die if you don't send them out. You can't find anyone at all. A million troops on a defense line of thousands of kilometers are very small, because they can't be together. One hundred thousand soldiers is equal to more than one million soldiers. They will always take the initiative and attack the weak points of your army. You will always be a minority against the majority. If they hit you ten times, they will hit you a hundred times. When your army comes to support them, they will leave.
Crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame
It is okay to write more descriptions of the head wives in the book, but there is a problem with this expression. What can be married to many is concubinage, not marriage. I have not seen the royal family and nobles of the Qin State have several wives, so time travel novels must pay attention to inappropriate wording. The status of women in the Qin State is not low, especially the head wives.
Still good!
The chapters are too confusing, the preface does not match the follow-up, and what was said in the previous chapter is missing from the next chapter. It makes my head hurt to read it.
Update soon. Update soon. Update soon. Say important things three times!
Update soon. Update soon. Update soon. Say important things three times!
this is disgusting
I don't know what you think of rebelling like this. Anyway, it looks disgusting to me.
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Official(40)Scraped 5d ago
Plagiarize it
I found a book on the Internet with a similar name to this book. That book is called The Gambit Invites Zulong to Rebellion. It has been updated to almost 400 chapters. I looked at the table of contents and found that it is similar to this book. Wow, awesome. I understand everything.
I just finished reading the first few chapters and I think they are good. But I would like to offer some comments of my own.
First, calling Ying Zheng Lao Zhao is a bit awkward, but this is just my own feeling and nothing serious. The second thing is that I think Zhao Yuan told so many important inside stories to two people who had just met. He revealed too much information without knowing the other person's talents, background, and purpose, and the pace was too fast. The third is that as the majestic Qin Shihuang, he did not look like an emperor at all in the previous chapters and was a bit too approachable. Zhao Yuan said in front of Qin Shihuang that the Great Wall was not good. He was too hasty and would definitely trigger a rebellion. Qin Shihuang, on the other hand, was just like a student attending a lecture. He was not angry at all and did not refute at all. As an emperor, he can't have such a good temper. Although Qin Shihuang could understand it and knew that what he said was reasonable, he had no words to defend himself and it was not practical. Also, Qin Shihuang believed whatever Zhao Yuan said. Zhao Yuan said that the elixir was poisonous, and Qin Shihuang immediately believed it without any doubt. If Qin Shihuang said that Qin Shihuang could live for five or six years, could Qin Shihuang also believe it? It doesn't make sense. Personally speaking, this Qin Shihuang is nothing like the Qin Shihuang who could sweep the six countries and unify the world. He feels like a passer-by who has become wise. Of course, these are just some of my suggestions.
The quality of this novel is okay, but there is one point that makes me a little angry.
Take the content of 60 and 61 as an example. The content of the previous one and the next one are a bit inconsistent. How much space is there in between? How come you find out that you don't know how to deal with it, so you jump directly to the court. Read it yourself. The author found the 60 and 61 photos yourself. Can you read them clearly? There is no middle process between the two.
The chapters are too confusing
@author The chapters are so messy. I don't want to read them. Please hurry up and correct them. What did the editor think that made you mess around like this? @Editor
Another piece of writing that is not even as good as writing on paper. You haven't even tried at all. How can you fight the Huns without building the Great Wall? Only with the Great Wall can you have the ability to send troops. Without the Great Wall, you would always be passively beaten. If the Huns don't fight with your army, they can just burn, kill and loot. How can you pursue them? You will always be beaten by the majority. If you send out 100,000 troops, the Huns will not fight you. If you divide your troops into 10, the Huns will still not fight you. Are you dividing your troops? Scouts will die if you don't send them out. You can't find anyone at all. A million troops on a defense line of thousands of kilometers are very small, because they can't be together. One hundred thousand soldiers is equal to more than one million soldiers. They will always take the initiative and attack the weak points of your army. You will always be a minority against the majority. If they hit you ten times, they will hit you a hundred times. When your army comes to support them, they will leave.
Crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame
It is okay to write more descriptions of the head wives in the book, but there is a problem with this expression. What can be married to many is concubinage, not marriage. I have not seen the royal family and nobles of the Qin State have several wives, so time travel novels must pay attention to inappropriate wording. The status of women in the Qin State is not low, especially the head wives.
Still good!
The chapters are too confusing, the preface does not match the follow-up, and what was said in the previous chapter is missing from the next chapter. It makes my head hurt to read it.
Update soon. Update soon. Update soon. Say important things three times!
Update soon. Update soon. Update soon. Say important things three times!
this is disgusting
I don't know what you think of rebelling like this. Anyway, it looks disgusting to me.
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