Prehistoric: the Emperor Came to Ziwei and Asked About Eternity
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Introduction: [Traditional prehistoric novels, unsystematic, not cool! In the Age of Ending Dharma, all things withered, gods disappeared, everything returned to chaos, time and space were chaotic, and a ray of light was twisted into it, spanning time, space, fate, cause and effect... Back to the time when chaos split and the universe began. Three thousand great gods and demons fell, and Pangu, the great great god and demon of power, was exhausted and merged into the prehistoric times. A crack in time and space appeared in the heaven and earth, and a ray of light emerged and melted into the wilderness. This time, strange things appear in the world. Will there be a different result? Can the universe achieve eternity?
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Official(14)Scraped 25d ago
Isn't Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian equal to the saint? So humble?
The preface does not match the postscript. Have you forgotten what you wrote before? Then I started picking up blindly
There are so many mistakes, and I wonder if the author didn't check it because of the different realms? There are magic weapons as well. They have been traded with others and can still appear on the original owner. They are completely written randomly. The author did not check and rewrite this book. It is undeniable that there is no problem with the logic, but your little mistakes are too dense and difficult to read. There are almost one or two chapters. I hope the author will read it and find it for himself. You will know if my comment is correct or not if you read it from beginning to end.
I really don't think it's that good, it looks so humbling.
What is this written about? Pig's trotters are also the first batch of innate gods and demons. How come they are so humble everywhere? The highest among the Three Pure Ones is Taiyi. The pig's trotters are big and you still call them Taoist brothers. How licking is this? What about the Emperor Star of Ziwei? How majestic is your emperor? Bullshit
The wording and sentence making are so messy, and I can't read the various titles and so on. Don't you read it over again after you finish writing? It should be read smoothly. Don't you feel awkward when you describe yourself by calling yourself "down there"?
I suggest the author treat these as an outline and start over again. There are too many mistakes in the content, and it doesn't flow smoothly. There are paragraphs here and there.
Rethink the outline and rewrite it. Emperor Juntaiyi is the second generation star god, and the first generation star god is the sacred beast of Zhuzhao Netherworld! So does Wang Shu, there are still three days!
Author, please open it if you can. I was speechless looking at it
It's not unreasonable that no one has read it. Let the author restart it. I couldn't resist it in the first chapter.
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Official(14)Scraped 25d ago
Isn't Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian equal to the saint? So humble?
The preface does not match the postscript. Have you forgotten what you wrote before? Then I started picking up blindly
There are so many mistakes, and I wonder if the author didn't check it because of the different realms? There are magic weapons as well. They have been traded with others and can still appear on the original owner. They are completely written randomly. The author did not check and rewrite this book. It is undeniable that there is no problem with the logic, but your little mistakes are too dense and difficult to read. There are almost one or two chapters. I hope the author will read it and find it for himself. You will know if my comment is correct or not if you read it from beginning to end.
I really don't think it's that good, it looks so humbling.
What is this written about? Pig's trotters are also the first batch of innate gods and demons. How come they are so humble everywhere? The highest among the Three Pure Ones is Taiyi. The pig's trotters are big and you still call them Taoist brothers. How licking is this? What about the Emperor Star of Ziwei? How majestic is your emperor? Bullshit
The wording and sentence making are so messy, and I can't read the various titles and so on. Don't you read it over again after you finish writing? It should be read smoothly. Don't you feel awkward when you describe yourself by calling yourself "down there"?
I suggest the author treat these as an outline and start over again. There are too many mistakes in the content, and it doesn't flow smoothly. There are paragraphs here and there.
Rethink the outline and rewrite it. Emperor Juntaiyi is the second generation star god, and the first generation star god is the sacred beast of Zhuzhao Netherworld! So does Wang Shu, there are still three days!
Author, please open it if you can. I was speechless looking at it
It's not unreasonable that no one has read it. Let the author restart it. I couldn't resist it in the first chapter.
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