Prehistoric: from Koi to Emperor of Heaven
by After The Mist And Rain Parted
About This Novel
At the beginning of the prehistoric period, the struggle for the throne of the three emperors has not yet been settled, the struggle of the five emperors is still in its infancy, and the three immortals are still the elders of the divine way. Dao Chu, who traveled through time from later generations, wanted to start his own business by competing with the three talents of heaven, earth, man and water, mix them with human and water, encompass the heaven and earth, and unify the ancient divine way! Make the great world great again! The torrent of the times is rolling by. Can the people of future generations reverse the trend that has not yet come? Can they reverse the innate nature with the body of an ant, let humans touch the earth, and let the earth rule the sky! It all starts with a little koi!
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Official(12)Scraped 23d ago
The writing is too confusing, difficult to understand, the level of cultivation is low, and it feels like an imaginary historical novel. It did not write that the gods of the Shinto are the same as the Tao, that the gods are as powerful as prisons, that the immortals are noble and free. Become a four-dimensional figure who is nothing
The biggest flaw of this book is the emotion. It looks like a yellow hair. The author has never been in love, so it feels like YY😦. Use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. If you can't write emotions well, write less. Take your time, don't make it a big disgusting thing for everyone.
I feel that the main world of the prehistoric world is well written, and it would be even better if it could be connected with other worlds in the chaotic void. If you have time, you can write a few more worldviews that are different from the immortal world, and then connect them in series. Wouldn't that be more interesting? Just like Warhammer
Why can't I see that you are writing a prehistoric novel, "Kowloon Pulling the Coffin"? The problem is that I haven't read it. If you like Zhe Tian, then write Zhe Tian, bro.
A little too watery, but otherwise good
Thank you, God and Demon Star of Hope! ! !
For the first time in my life, I was rewarded with 5,000 starting coins, so touched! ! !
The biggest problem with this book is that the incarnation is tyrannical and the main body is an ant. In fact, it doesn't matter if the main body is coy, but the main body is still very active. If someone can erase it with a thought, it will be very fragmented. He is such a powerful incarnation, but his main body is in someone else's mind. Author, don't you think you can continue to read it like this? Therefore, sometimes you really have to look for the reasons for your poor grades and listen more to readers' feedback. This is what adults say.
It's written in the prehistoric era, but it's about practicing Qi and building the foundation. It's only a few years since the prehistoric era, and the time span is several hours and months. It's not even as good as a martial artist, and the protagonist has no way of seeking the heart of the Tao.
Idiot, Idiot, Idiot, Idiot, Idiot, Idiot
The writing is so messy, I didn't want to read it after reading the first chapter. Are you awakening the memory of your past life, or are you seizing your body? It was first said that you came to this world, then became a fish, and then you had the name of predecessor. I really don't know what you were thinking. It's written in such a mess.
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Community(0)
Official(12)Scraped 23d ago
The writing is too confusing, difficult to understand, the level of cultivation is low, and it feels like an imaginary historical novel. It did not write that the gods of the Shinto are the same as the Tao, that the gods are as powerful as prisons, that the immortals are noble and free. Become a four-dimensional figure who is nothing
The biggest flaw of this book is the emotion. It looks like a yellow hair. The author has never been in love, so it feels like YY😦. Use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. If you can't write emotions well, write less. Take your time, don't make it a big disgusting thing for everyone.
I feel that the main world of the prehistoric world is well written, and it would be even better if it could be connected with other worlds in the chaotic void. If you have time, you can write a few more worldviews that are different from the immortal world, and then connect them in series. Wouldn't that be more interesting? Just like Warhammer
Why can't I see that you are writing a prehistoric novel, "Kowloon Pulling the Coffin"? The problem is that I haven't read it. If you like Zhe Tian, then write Zhe Tian, bro.
A little too watery, but otherwise good
Thank you, God and Demon Star of Hope! ! !
For the first time in my life, I was rewarded with 5,000 starting coins, so touched! ! !
The biggest problem with this book is that the incarnation is tyrannical and the main body is an ant. In fact, it doesn't matter if the main body is coy, but the main body is still very active. If someone can erase it with a thought, it will be very fragmented. He is such a powerful incarnation, but his main body is in someone else's mind. Author, don't you think you can continue to read it like this? Therefore, sometimes you really have to look for the reasons for your poor grades and listen more to readers' feedback. This is what adults say.
It's written in the prehistoric era, but it's about practicing Qi and building the foundation. It's only a few years since the prehistoric era, and the time span is several hours and months. It's not even as good as a martial artist, and the protagonist has no way of seeking the heart of the Tao.
Idiot, Idiot, Idiot, Idiot, Idiot, Idiot
The writing is so messy, I didn't want to read it after reading the first chapter. Are you awakening the memory of your past life, or are you seizing your body? It was first said that you came to this world, then became a fish, and then you had the name of predecessor. I really don't know what you were thinking. It's written in such a mess.
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