Three Kingdoms: Starting from Luofengpo

It's very poisonous. A young general went to deal with the surrendered general in private. Hahahahahahahahaha. It's poisoned to death. Zhang Ren is written to death.

God is damn prepared to train him, isn't it just to let him die? Both Liu Bei and Pang Tong knew that Pang Tong sacrificed his own life in exchange for Liu Bei's division being famous. The most damn amazing thing is that you have less than 1,000 soldiers in total, and the number of people on the opposite side is several times more than yours, and you are still about to be ambushed. The wonderful Three Kingdoms turned into a fairy tale

The protagonist has so few scenes? Moreover, the plot outline is unclear, the author's writing style is so poor, and the main character just disappears. Why is the war in other places written in such detail? Won't you just take it all away? The protagonist has no chance to appear

The writing is a flaw! The narrative is cumbersome, many sentences do not make sense, and there are many superfluous sentences. ''Looking at Zhang Ren for a long time, Zhao Tong thought hard for a long time before he made a plan in his heart! ''We are fighting, can you wait for a while or a long time? I died eight times~

First, there are too many bad words and phrases, such as "far below oneself" and so on... The second is that the wording is too modern. In fact, the author of the characters' lines can refer to the vernacular. A group of ancient people only spoke some modern vocabulary, which is too funny.

When you came, you fell to death on the rugged mountain road. Can the enemy attack you? Are mountain roads so unfriendly? You said there are different roads, and different roads come from behind. Even so, were there so many roads in ancient times? If you continue like this, if you retreat to a rugged mountain road, how can the cavalry charge forward? He also prides himself on being resourceful! ! Moreover, when the cavalry attacks at night, the road is friendly and flat again. Do the horses still carry long-term lights? Or are there solar street lights? Is the war going on around me silent and slow-moving? Otherwise, if you are fighting for your life noisily, you can still hear the sound of horse hooves ten miles away. How loud is the movement of the horse? Human ears cannot hear the sound of horse hooves ten miles away. What's more, when you are still fighting noisily and fighting for your life, have you used any IQ to write a book? Why can't a book become a classic if it's not good? No need to worry! No common sense! Hardly write the plot!

A very good book. Worth a look

Chapter 6: Errors in logical thinking. The protagonist's army suppresses the enemy step by step, but it is the protagonist's army that is defeated.

The protagonist starts by rescuing Feng Chu.

1. The dialogue between the characters in the article is too modern and lacks ancient style. 2. The most important thing is that for some parts that require additional explanation, don't force the explanation through the characters' mouths. This will not only make the dialogue between the characters appear extremely long-winded, but also have a superfluous and awkward feeling (for example, in War Horse Chao, there is no need for Ma Chao to educate the protagonist on the battlefield about why he is not strong enough, and the language is too modern. It does not look like the ancients. Even modern people will not stop fighting with others and stop to educate the opponent, right?)