Bandits of the Three Kingdoms

Bandits of the Three Kingdoms

by Sword In Heaven

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About This Novel

Don't talk to me about the three hundred years of Han Dynasty's foundation, I'm a bandit! As a human being, you have to go your own way, let alone going back to ancient times.

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My Sister is Cute77mo ago

After reading the previous chapters, the protagonist was talking to himself, which made me feel uncomfortable.

Author, could you please stop writing soliloquies? Each character should have his or her own language and personality. Is this your first time writing a novel? Could you please stop letting the protagonist talk to himself alone? What the hell are you writing about famous historical figures? The protagonist finds Guan Yu in a few days, and Guan Yu says hello, and then the protagonist talks to himself, author, if you continue like this, this novel will soon turn into a Laji novel.

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My Sister is Cute77mo ago

Can't stand it anymore

Author, please read other better Three Kingdoms novels yourself, and then read the novel you wrote. The protagonist talks to himself, historical figures have no personality and thoughts, etc. The process is too fast, like a running story. Dozens of words include one historical figure, and then another. Forget it, author, read your novel yourself. To be honest, it's uncomfortable and I can't bear to watch it.

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