The Daily Top Student at Hogwarts
by Drunk And Rub The Clouds Into Pieces
About This Novel
Karen, who originally thought she had traveled to a parallel world, finally knew that she had arrived in the world of Harry Potter when she was eleven years old. With eyes that can see through magic, Karen is destined to become a master of the magical world. Karen has always felt that the most fascinating part of magic is not the earth-shattering spells, but the subtle flow of magic in daily life. He would rather spend his time reading the various magic books in the library, or observing the magical heritage of this thousand-year-old castle.
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Official(12)Scraped 4d ago
I really can't stand it anymore. It's okay if you write that the protagonist is a time traveler and is much smarter than a little wizard. It's okay if you write that the protagonist has strong understanding ability. It's okay if you write that the protagonist is very talented. It's okay if you write that the protagonist is willing to answer Akito's questions. But starting from Chapter 8, you start to let the protagonist take the initiative to give advice to others, or take the initiative to give advice to others in class. Do you really think that the professor is dead? The professor didn't give any advice and you wrote that the protagonist ran out to give advice. Does this mean that the protagonist is more awesome than the professor? The protagonist has only learned magic for a few days and yet he takes the initiative to teach others? Do you want the protagonist to be a student or a teacher? Are you letting the protagonist dance like this because you're afraid that Voldemort won't be able to see such a powerful protagonist next year?
It's very innovative, and the addition of friends to the three protagonists is particularly good. But I hope Furong can be the heroine. After all, there are many novels in which other characters are heroines.
lightning protection sister
I have a sister, and she is a sister with wizard talent.
Chapter 10, I think it is necessary to inform the writer. In the Wizarding War, house elves are the descendants of Goblins and Nali, not elves.
A perfect piece of Harry Potter fanfic.
Because it smells like AI, I really can't substitute it.
The teacher's idea is very wonderful, highly recommended
It's okay so far
This book is more about daily life, and there is nothing toxic about it so far. The only problem is that it is too small, and I don't know if the author can control the pace later on.
I only read two chapters and I thought it was great. The details are well described. I wrote the book with my heart instead of just copying a running account.
It's very smooth, but it feels a bit too streamlined and uninteresting?
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Official(12)Scraped 4d ago
I really can't stand it anymore. It's okay if you write that the protagonist is a time traveler and is much smarter than a little wizard. It's okay if you write that the protagonist has strong understanding ability. It's okay if you write that the protagonist is very talented. It's okay if you write that the protagonist is willing to answer Akito's questions. But starting from Chapter 8, you start to let the protagonist take the initiative to give advice to others, or take the initiative to give advice to others in class. Do you really think that the professor is dead? The professor didn't give any advice and you wrote that the protagonist ran out to give advice. Does this mean that the protagonist is more awesome than the professor? The protagonist has only learned magic for a few days and yet he takes the initiative to teach others? Do you want the protagonist to be a student or a teacher? Are you letting the protagonist dance like this because you're afraid that Voldemort won't be able to see such a powerful protagonist next year?
It's very innovative, and the addition of friends to the three protagonists is particularly good. But I hope Furong can be the heroine. After all, there are many novels in which other characters are heroines.
lightning protection sister
I have a sister, and she is a sister with wizard talent.
Chapter 10, I think it is necessary to inform the writer. In the Wizarding War, house elves are the descendants of Goblins and Nali, not elves.
A perfect piece of Harry Potter fanfic.
Because it smells like AI, I really can't substitute it.
The teacher's idea is very wonderful, highly recommended
It's okay so far
This book is more about daily life, and there is nothing toxic about it so far. The only problem is that it is too small, and I don't know if the author can control the pace later on.
I only read two chapters and I thought it was great. The details are well described. I wrote the book with my heart instead of just copying a running account.
It's very smooth, but it feels a bit too streamlined and uninteresting?
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