Meizong: Because I Am Afraid of Pain, I Choose Long-range Attack Skills
by Poor People Like To Perm Their Hair
About This Novel
Leylin's parents disappeared, leaving behind a watch that contained countless strange objects. Rusty throwing knives; The golden compass that guides the way; Unpalatable fruits with twisted patterns; A strange shuttle composed of three hundred and sixty-five blades; A long dark golden stick over two meters long and fifteen centimeters thick; "Xiao Li Flying Knife" Collector's Edition; "True Interpretation of Mind Power" Basic Building Edition; The top-secret authentic version of "Controlling the Sword with Qi"; There are many strange people in the world. A spider flying over walls, a veteran who has been frozen for decades, a purple sweet potato who is good at snapping his fingers, a nagging antique shop owner, a mysterious man in a black suit... Every item tells a story. Every story is a mystery. Son, want to know where we are? So come explore the multiverse, where we put it all!
What Readers Think
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Official(12)Scraped 17d ago
There are too many stitches and they are too dense. The key is to sew so many stories together, but I think at least the timeline should be explained... At the beginning, I wrote about Uncle Qi in Detective Tang 2. There was a big fight and a lot of stories. I started the plot of Detective Tang 2 only after it was over, but I stopped writing it... I went to The Adventures of Jackie Chan to start the Spell Chapter. Before I finished writing the first Spell, I started writing Jurassic Park again... Introduction: I didn't go into details about the things my parents left behind. I haven't said anything about the Devil Fruit until now. The shuttle seems to swallow the stars...
Don't understand what the protagonist is doing? There is no goal, just kneeling down and licking the protagonist of the plot, hitting the east with a hammer and the west with a stick. Others treat you like a fool, you treat others like your first love
Three years and three years of sewing and mending.
It looks good so far. The author's writing is smooth and the protagonist's IQ online is interesting. The plot is interesting and constantly arouses people's interest. The only drawback is that the protagonist's learning skills are weird, so I'm missing two stars.
The good news is Stitches
There are too many bad information stitched together, stitched before 30 chapters, Detective Tang, The Adventures of Jackie Chan, Bodyguard, Assassin's Creed, S. H. I. E. L. D., Men in Black, Spider-Man, Mutants, there should be others that I haven't looked at carefully.
There are too many stitches, and the various combat powers are blurred. The plot is a bit confusing
Too many seams
There are too many stitches, it's a mess, District 13, S. H. I. E. L. D., And K's organization. The functions of these three organizations are overlapping and repetitive. In theory, this will not happen. The author did not make any changes, just threw them together.
What is this? What is this?
Nowadays, my writing is getting worse and worse. I write wherever I think of it, and I make it up mechanically. Even a word needs to be explained for 1,800 words. After taking a look at the new book, it was even worse. Old readers have left and new readers don't want to come, so let's leave it at that.
When will the new book be released? I wanted to ask, it's been a long time.
It's hard to comment, it's too messy and complicated. Your hierarchy is not very clear. The scene transition is a bit messy. I can understand all the characters in this book, mainly because I am a bookworm of 7 years. But if others see it, they won't be able to recognize it clearly. Your world view is quite big. But too complicated.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(12)Scraped 17d ago
There are too many stitches and they are too dense. The key is to sew so many stories together, but I think at least the timeline should be explained... At the beginning, I wrote about Uncle Qi in Detective Tang 2. There was a big fight and a lot of stories. I started the plot of Detective Tang 2 only after it was over, but I stopped writing it... I went to The Adventures of Jackie Chan to start the Spell Chapter. Before I finished writing the first Spell, I started writing Jurassic Park again... Introduction: I didn't go into details about the things my parents left behind. I haven't said anything about the Devil Fruit until now. The shuttle seems to swallow the stars...
Don't understand what the protagonist is doing? There is no goal, just kneeling down and licking the protagonist of the plot, hitting the east with a hammer and the west with a stick. Others treat you like a fool, you treat others like your first love
Three years and three years of sewing and mending.
It looks good so far. The author's writing is smooth and the protagonist's IQ online is interesting. The plot is interesting and constantly arouses people's interest. The only drawback is that the protagonist's learning skills are weird, so I'm missing two stars.
The good news is Stitches
There are too many bad information stitched together, stitched before 30 chapters, Detective Tang, The Adventures of Jackie Chan, Bodyguard, Assassin's Creed, S. H. I. E. L. D., Men in Black, Spider-Man, Mutants, there should be others that I haven't looked at carefully.
There are too many stitches, and the various combat powers are blurred. The plot is a bit confusing
Too many seams
There are too many stitches, it's a mess, District 13, S. H. I. E. L. D., And K's organization. The functions of these three organizations are overlapping and repetitive. In theory, this will not happen. The author did not make any changes, just threw them together.
What is this? What is this?
Nowadays, my writing is getting worse and worse. I write wherever I think of it, and I make it up mechanically. Even a word needs to be explained for 1,800 words. After taking a look at the new book, it was even worse. Old readers have left and new readers don't want to come, so let's leave it at that.
When will the new book be released? I wanted to ask, it's been a long time.
It's hard to comment, it's too messy and complicated. Your hierarchy is not very clear. The scene transition is a bit messy. I can understand all the characters in this book, mainly because I am a bookworm of 7 years. But if others see it, they won't be able to recognize it clearly. Your world view is quite big. But too complicated.
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