Under One Person: My Eldest Brother is Too Cautious!
by Lidu Muyang
About This Novel
Name: Zhang Shenxing Personality: Overly cautious! ! ! An accident brought Zhang Shenxing to the world under one person, and tragically he became the elder brother of the invisible scumbag Zhang Chulan. His first reaction was that as the suspected heir of the "Qi Ti Origin", he would be killed in seconds as long as he showed his face? System, I really don't want to travel through time! I still have countless figurine wives waiting for me! However, in the face of the system saying that his protest was ineffective, Zhang Shenxing had no choice but to race against time and work hard to upgrade, but his behavior seemed almost crazy to other strangers! Zhang Lingyu: I just don't like him and want to show off, but he actually wants to use the Five Thunder Heavenly Master's Zhengfa to kill me. Does he want me to be wiped out in ashes? Wang Ye: This pretense is too much! Is it just a matter of seconds to meet someone? ! Ding Shian: Hundreds of martial arts are of no use to him. Is this man's turtle shell magic skill full? Xiao Zizai: Ahhh! Don't come over here! Zhang Chulan: I said that my brother is just too cautious. Do you believe it?
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
Isn't it funny that a time traveler knows the plot and still pretends to be stupid? The writing is so innocent, as if nothing is clear, but if you look at the beginning of your writing, is it a time-traveler, or is it clearly written as a time-traveler, a time-traveler who knows everything?
What's the difference between having a protagonist and not having one? It doesn't matter at all what should happen or what happens. So what does he have to do? Fan fiction is not about inserting a person into it. There is a big brother like the protagonist. What's the matter with Zhang Chulan? Zhang Huaiyi died as soon as he said he would die. It has no impact on the protagonist? The protagonist doesn't care at all, he's a son of a man in vain, the author is awesome
The writing is good, I recommend you to write a Jianlai fanfic
You are already a qualified fan author. No one else is worthy of your writing style. I suggest you just write swords as a fan.
The writing is a bit unlike one person...
Have you cut it?
If this is the case, should the author continue writing the next book? I think that one is better, but of course no one reads novels with brains, right?
Now
This is not how you enter the palace, so don't push it.
Difference
The writing is careless, inserted randomly, here and now, and the content cannot be connected.
Can you read comics before writing a novel? The donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth
Did you write this based on the skills in the game?
If you can't write this book well! Just continue writing the next book!
If not, just continue writing the previous book!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
Isn't it funny that a time traveler knows the plot and still pretends to be stupid? The writing is so innocent, as if nothing is clear, but if you look at the beginning of your writing, is it a time-traveler, or is it clearly written as a time-traveler, a time-traveler who knows everything?
What's the difference between having a protagonist and not having one? It doesn't matter at all what should happen or what happens. So what does he have to do? Fan fiction is not about inserting a person into it. There is a big brother like the protagonist. What's the matter with Zhang Chulan? Zhang Huaiyi died as soon as he said he would die. It has no impact on the protagonist? The protagonist doesn't care at all, he's a son of a man in vain, the author is awesome
The writing is good, I recommend you to write a Jianlai fanfic
You are already a qualified fan author. No one else is worthy of your writing style. I suggest you just write swords as a fan.
The writing is a bit unlike one person...
Have you cut it?
If this is the case, should the author continue writing the next book? I think that one is better, but of course no one reads novels with brains, right?
Now
This is not how you enter the palace, so don't push it.
Difference
The writing is careless, inserted randomly, here and now, and the content cannot be connected.
Can you read comics before writing a novel? The donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth
Did you write this based on the skills in the game?
If you can't write this book well! Just continue writing the next book!
If not, just continue writing the previous book!
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