American Comics: Starting from the Adventures of Jackie Chan

The single heroine hopes Xiaoyu is the heroine

It doesn't matter if the author is a novice in writing, a good story doesn't require too many elegant words. But you, the protagonist, don't seem to fit the character and it's very uncomfortable. After five hundred years in hell, are you still a human being? My behavior after coming out of hell didn't feel like a five-hundred-year-old devil, but rather like a social animal who had just gained power and found it troublesome. There is also a setting that has been emphasized repeatedly since then - the balance of yin and yang. This is your biggest failure as the author. It was painful to read. To be honest, the biggest selling point of this novel is that it travels to the mixed world of Marvel and Jackie Chan's Adventures. Mixed worlds are okay, but this is a second creation, but you have to justify it anyway! Set the balance of yin and yang? Don't laugh at me about this setting. The Adventures of Jackie Chan have already arrived at Marvel. Is the balance of yin and yang still there? You can insist on a second design, but where is the rationality? In layman's terms, the balance of yin and yang means that the good and the bad are equally powerful. When one becomes stronger, the other will become stronger, and when one becomes weaker, the other will become weaker. The eight gods are targeting the eight demons, so who is the Supreme Mage targeting? Who do these superheroes target? Only supervillains? So who is Thanos targeting? Who does the dark dimension demon target? Who do the gods of Asgard, headed by Odin, target? What about the Celestial Team? What about the Court of Life? The balance of yin and yang is about balance. How to balance this situation in Marvel? It is not rigorous for the author to substitute a world like Jackie Chan's Adventures that is only limited to the earth and the moon into a multiverse world like Marvel! I feel like I'm asking for trouble by reading this book. Maybe you say why I use my brain to read novels, then stop being funny. I really don't use my brain to read novels, or I can read a novel without using my brain. So what's the point of this novel? It's better to read some popular novels, some tyrants fall in love with me, I have a sword to open up the world (does this one have me? (I don't know), at least these novels will not make you feel that your IQ is being rubbed when you read them. The reason why they are so cool is that they can make you feel reasonably happy. If you really want to be happy without thinking, I suggest you to dream. There is everything in your dream. You can be the creator god in your dream, and everything can come true. You can feel as happy as you want. --The above comments are just my humble opinions. There is no malicious behavior in the ratings. If there are any mistakes, please point them out. In fact, I don't know much about Marvel.

Should you write about the Holy Lord or the protagonist? This protagonist is like a waste. He does nothing, has nothing to look forward to, and doesn't talk about it. Even the shadow soldiers don't listen to him when he says he is a shadow demon. He says he is the ninth demon. There is no record. Does that mean you are just bragging about what you wrote? You simply combine Marvel and Jackie Chan's Adventures. What role does the protagonist play in it? I still don't know what the protagonist's purpose is. He doesn't even want to improve his strength. He doesn't fall in love without improving his strength. He doesn't have a good relationship with other demons. There is nothing interesting about it.

Are you copying someone else's? Not only are there many poisonous points, but there are also many typos

I listened to this book on station b and thought it was very well written. I downloaded it to read on QQ. Now I think this book is pretty good, but the protagonist is so yin and yang that he was transformed by black energy, so he is not a human being. Even if he was a human in his previous life, stayed in hell for 500 years, and was transformed by black energy, he would still be a demon no matter how he washes it off, right? No matter how similar the protagonist is to other demons, his stance should be that he is a demon. Good demons are also demons. Even if the protagonist group admits that he is a good demon, how many people can the protagonist group represent? The protagonist group can admit it, but most people will never admit it. This is a position issue that will definitely form a conflict over time. According to the author's world view, there are many things that cannot be decided by Jackie Chan and Xiaoyu's agreement. It is not something that the protagonist can not do if he doesn't want to. The protagonist and Xiaoyu can Be friends, but it is absolutely impossible for a human to be friends with the protagonist. Either a demon backstabs a human, or a human backstabs a demon. No matter how many good things the demon does, in the eyes of people, he is a demon and an alien. This is the prejudice in people's hearts and is an absolutely inescapable contradiction. So the position is here. I believe no reader wants to see a demon who enjoys the status, power and immortality of a demon but has a human heart. What is the difference between such a demon and a traitor? So I think the protagonist's position should be clear. Even if the devil is not in harmony with the devil, he is his compatriot. Apart from the devil, he has no other compatriots. From the anime, there is no difference between them except for the Holy Lord. Of course, the main reason is that the Holy Lord betrayed them. I still hope that the protagonist will not favor humans, and of course other evil ones. When you are at the end of the road, leave a way out for your camp. If the protagonist, the devil, leaves hell, then he will grow. No one has discovered the devil now. Although the devil is very powerful, it is not strong enough according to the author's world view. When the protagonist is powerful enough, he will definitely not be able to hide it. Who else in the world can trust the devil? The world is a human world, and people will never tolerate a demon in a human world. Not to mention humans can cooperate with the protagonist. Even if the protagonist is willing to cooperate, can humans really trust a demon? What's more, a demon that can threaten him? I believe that strong human beings like Gu Yi will help mankind in times of crisis. The protagonist without companions will eventually be imprisoned back to hell. Then all the demons in hell will think that the protagonist is more disgusting than the Holy Lord, and will finally be waiting to rot in hell. The protagonist, be friends with Xiaoyu, hide in the human world and live a leisurely life, keeping his word. I think it is okay, but I still hope that the protagonist remembers that the devil is his compatriot. The protagonist can leave hell, and all the eight demons in hell are there. Those who contribute, don't think that the balance of yin and yang can be compatible. Ice and charcoal fire cannot be placed in the same container. If yin is strong, yang will inevitably decline, and if yang is strong, yin will decline. In the author's world view, the ancient first and other strong human beings have not taken action against demons, but they are always the camp of humans. If the protagonist does not take action against humans, he also hopes that the protagonist will always be in the camp of demons. I hope that the protagonist will not repeatedly jump between demons and humans. Don't think that humans and demons can coexist, and the human content is not inferior to the protagonist.

The protagonist will not attack those decent people. It gives the impression that he is the protagonist. He thinks that as long as he does this, those people will not do anything to him. He just feels that no one knows that he exists. It is a bit too naive to think that this way he can tell the truth safely.

To be honest, there is something wrong with the protagonist. He doesn't even know what he is doing or what he wants to do? He knows the world is dangerous but doesn't maintain a good relationship with the eight demons. I don't know how to use the plot to gain power. I feel that the protagonist only knows how to be passive. He doesn't know what he is doing and is very stupid. Maybe he thinks that if the eight demons are gone, the decent people will let him go.

The eight demons correspond to the Eight Diagrams. It can be said that the world is immortal and demons are immortal. What does your ninth demon represent?

You can go pick up Xiaoyu

Next time I write it, I'll read it carefully. I'm confused by this.