The Hegemony System of the Three Kingdoms

In the Lingxiao Palace, Liu Bei looked at the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor gently stroked the male and female swords and said with emotion: "At the beginning, I gave you With this natal magic weapon, I don't expect you to grow them much. After all, you were just a straw mat seller and didn't have much money to buy materials. He stared deeply at Liu Bei and found that he really couldn't see through him. The Jade Emperor shook his head, "I didn't expect that you could actually practice it to this point. At this point, it even has 90% of the power of Xuanyuan Sword! He Xuan Compared with Yuanjian, there is only a small difference!" Liu Bei remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish speaking. "Amazing! Amazing!" Qihuo sighed in admiration, "If it can be improved again, then Isn't it another great sword? Liu Bei was silent. He knows all this. "But the Jade Emperor's talk After a turn, "It's difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! Your The sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so you need to use the five basic elements. It takes decades of divine flame refining to become something like the Xuanyuan Sword. " The Jade Emperor looked at Liu Bei, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but said, "These five divine flames are crystal flames, Hunyuan Yan, Feng Luo Yan, Tianxing Yan and Sith Flame. Except for the first kind of me Yes, the remaining four are extremely rare, even your ancestor Liu Bang did not Own it!! Do you understand?" Liu Bei looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said slowly, "I have the last four. Only the first one is missing. " The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment. How is that possible!? How could he have those four divine flames!? Could it be Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "The reason why you came to me is Crystal flame? Liu Bei nodded and said: Yes, I came here just for the water experience.

I have a system and still hang out with Liu Bei, and they are sworn friends, bah.

If I really don't know some characters in people's names, I can look them up in a dictionary. Isn't it necessary to write Li Jue as Li Chui? Li urged? Your mother urges you to look up the words in the dictionary.

The useless protagonist is calculated mentally but not carelessly, and his own advantages are so great that he cannot kill Guan Hai. That's rubbish.

If we only take the unification as the end point, this article may not last long, and it will only be more than 1.5 Million words at most. When the system summons generals and civil servants, it is recommended to give an explanation for defecting. For example, before the implantation, they traveled with the protagonist, knew each other well, and were friends. Then they heard that the protagonist was summoned and came to help. Then there should be a process of greeting when meeting. Think about it, who would inexplicably seek refuge with a person they have only heard of? Who would take in someone they admire whom they have never met?? This link is a bit sloppy. It is recommended that the process of recognizing the master should be optimized. The protagonist should give others a high level of face. If a general kneels down and calls the master the master when meeting him, this is too cheap. Such a person is also too worthless. He calls everyone the master when he meets someone. There should be a conversation process. You want him to understand your mind and ambitions, so as to convince him. In addition, the attributes of the protagonist increase too fast (as does the official position. Upgrading to three levels in a row has made the soldiers crazy, and the protagonist...). If these are too easy and the meaning of the article cannot be understood, it is too simple and the author cannot show his talent. However, your article is not a brainless slap in the face, so it is difficult to be popular. The author is a newcomer and may not have paid attention when writing. It is recommended to read it after writing to see if the context is harmonious. And context! ! ! ! ! This is something that many, many, many, many authors ignore. You may just not care about these details, but if the context is inconsistent, it is really funny and disharmonious. Finally, I would like to suggest that if an author starts a book, he should never give up on it easily. It is extremely unwise to consume the trust of his readers in this way, and it will be easy to abandon the article if there are difficulties in the future. . . . . One more thing, if someone sees my comments, don't say something like "you can do better" or something like that. I am a reader, a reader, not a writer. My suggestions are a reference for the author, hoping to help the author's growth, so that if you write well, I will be comfortable reading it. As for always saying that you can do it, I don't know what the purpose is to prevent people from raising questions? Because this does not end the problem, and we cannot say that because the author has a hard time writing, we will not raise flaws, because the author needs to see the reader's thoughts and improve himself or other things. Over Best wishes 😍

If you don't kill Liu Bei immediately when you meet him and leave trouble to the world, you will still cause trouble for yourself.

Now to travel through the Three Kingdoms, you must have Zhao Yun ➕ Guo Jia. I am confused. Your system can select people to be forced to recognize the master in the Three Kingdoms. Why not choose Lu Bu and Cao Cao?

During the Three Kingdoms period, 1 gold was equal to 2,500 coins! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The most annoying book to read. ------

Typos are not a common problem. The author should check carefully.