Marvelous Marvel Journey

Too bad, even worse than the composition written by my brother.

One-star deduction setting, one-star deduction ability source Author, could you please consider the readers' feelings? I know you must have checked the information when writing novels, but many readers will not read some out-of-the-way settings. You can at least introduce the settings. Except for some popular ones, others that are less popular are generally not read. This results in some foreshadowings you wrote that readers will not be able to see at all, and may even see it as a fog. If you want this book to go far, just open a few chapters to talk about the basic settings. I read novels to pass the time. In order to understand the novel, I have to look up information. If I am too lazy, wouldn't it be nice to find other novels to read if I have the time? Are you right?

Not only is the plot written in a mess, the content is also not coherent at all. Moreover, the protagonist is a virgin who likes to erect memorial arches and always finds excuses to deny it.

Okay, very good. It's just that there are too many women in the protagonist, and I can't remember who is who.

Only read the first few chapters First, the plot is confusing and incoherent, and cannot be connected at all. It is not that the chapters cannot be connected, but the same chapter also feels fragmented. Second, the plots are very similar. I have basically seen the first few plots, and even the names of the people are similar.

It's not as messy as I thought. It should have been revised by the author. The first few chapters talked about the protagonist traveling through time and gaining magical memories and an enhanced body. Later, he met a human trafficker and eliminated the evil. It's not as messy as the comment section says. I just didn't introduce the golden finger and what its specific function is. But it should be introduced later.

A mild one can make people laugh, but a serious one can only give a bad review.

But if so many people don't like it, then I won't watch it.

It's very tiring to watch. The main character's abilities are not clearly stated. It's all a mess.

It's so confusing. When I first saw the main character's magic, it suddenly came on without any explanation! The plot is also very confusing.