The Most Powerful Guy in the World

Is it really okay for the protagonist to travel through time and become a eunuch?[Emot=default,41/]Wouldn't your conscience hurt?[Emot=default,52/]

This book is very well written and the article is detailed. Watertight. The psychological description of the characters is lifelike. The only flaw is "Zhutian". I think that many, most book friends. They all come for the name of the heavens. Less individual parts of math probably are. I have nothing to watch when I'm bored, so just take a look. Since I am coming to the heavens, and I really don't write about the heavens, I will inevitably feel uncomfortable in my heart. I am just here to relieve my boredom when I have nothing to read, and I am no longer in the mood. The only downfall of this book is its title. Unless the author can write tens of thousands of pages. Yes, that's right, tens of thousands. After reading this article, I think the author should be an indecisive person. Either it's a newbie who doesn't know how to write. Either he is a veteran and is reluctant to part with it. But ultimately I'm more of a novice. This book has strayed off topic, and a veteran won't let that happen. However, this book is still worth reading. As long as you don't care about the title, okay, my speech is over, thank you all, I am a master.

Since you are writing a story about traveling through the heavens, the rhythm must be controlled well. Hundreds of chapters have been written in this first world (this is another sense of hydrology). The first world shapes the character of the protagonist. It is fine if it is longer, but this is too long. Since it means that you are the most powerful man in the world, how many worlds do you want to travel through, or do you plan to go through a few worlds and directly reach the sky in one step? What's the point of looking at it like this, so the first world is too poorly written, and I don't know how to write it later. Anyway, I gave up after reading Chapter 400. I think I have persisted for a long time. It feels like it is using the slogan of Zhu Tianwen. Although it is also a time-travel novel, it does not fit the title of the book. However, the author's writing style is not bad, and it looks okay. I would like to suggest that the author change the title of the book so that it may look better to readers. Otherwise, the title of your book is slightly different from the content you wrote. Or I can speed up the pace in the later stages, but I'm still not very optimistic about this book. After all, I wrote too slowly in the early stage, and there will be a contrast if I speed up later! So this tests the author's level. The above is just my personal opinion, please don't bother me.

Nearly a thousand chapters can be written in one world, but the author plans to end it in one world? If I were to write about Zhutian, I would have to write tens of thousands of chapters.

However, there are still some holes that have not been filled, such as 1⃣ The timeline and body of the two worlds 2⃣ Yue Buqun's line and Dongfang Bubai's line (this should be due to interest, it doesn't matter if you don't fill it in) 3⃣ The most important thing is Wang Yangming's line. This person is a lucky man, and he is probably going to take advantage of his luck to return to the original world. 4⃣ The line of Yang Yanx, the former capital, and his Yang Shen, the son of Yang Shen, has disappeared now. 5⃣ The Nanjing area needs to be reorganized. I remember there is a big guy (I forgot his name, an old man) waiting there. 6⃣ The recent shipbuilding, is it really going to go to sea? The number of words is lost, but the plot is open to question, but it must be a fortune, and it has buried more than a hundred chapters. Best, when will the emperor realize his special feelings for Chu Daban? Do we really have to wait until the beauty leaves before we finally wake up and think about people when we see things?

Give the author a small suggestion The writing of this book is a bit too delicate, and the pace feels a bit slow, but I have to say that the writing is very good. The pace of the book should not be too fast all at once. In fact, it is okay to write slowly, but some authors are invincible in their writing. I hope the author will not make such small mistakes.

Working on manuscripts in the study in the middle of the night. My wife is here again. In view of the fact that my IQ had been hit many times during the previous late night conversations, I got straight to the point: "We are just a couple. Over the years, I have done nothing but hard work. Please tell me what you have to say." My wife smiled: "If nothing happens, can't I give you a shoulder massage?" She started pressing my shoulders. "Comparing my skills with those of the girls at the spa, which one is better?" (This pit is too easy, can I jump into it?) "I don't know, I didn't press my shoulder." "If you don't press your shoulders, then where should you press them?" "I mean I've never been to a place like that." "Then why is there a leisure club printed on your lighter?" She quickly held the lighter on the table in her hand and asked me. I can't guard against this problem. I guess she had seen the lighter a long time ago, but instead of asking directly, she started to talk about it by pressing her shoulders. Boil ** in warm water and observe the words and expressions. Women, terrible. "The lighter should belong to Li Jianjun. I took it from him last time I had dinner with him. I didn't expect him to be someone who often goes to clubs." I can be considered a veteran, and I will throw dirty water on Li Jianjun for any unclear problem. Wife: "You and Li Jianjun are friends, right?" "Of course." "Does Li Jianjun know you cheated him like this?" His wife stretched out her right hand and showed the lighter, "This is just an ordinary lighter, and it doesn't say anything about leisure club at all. How did it become that Li Jianjun took it from the club?" It turned out to be a scam. She didn't see the lighter at all. "This..." I couldn't react at the moment. "You have grown up, and you lie without blinking an eye." "I just mentioned a possibility casually." "Then you can't trick Li Jianjun. Does he really go to that kind of club often? I told his wife to go." "No, just kidding, he never goes." "That's good. If you have friends who go to such a place, I suggest you don't go there." I breathed a sigh of relief: "Of course. Let me just say, how could there be such a lighter in our house." "Really? Then, where did this lighter come from?" She stretched out her left hand and showed a lighter with XX Leisure Club written on it. " I was completely confused. I first used my friend as a shield, then I found out that it was a false alarm, and then I cleared my friend. When I thought the crisis was over, I didn't expect it had just begun. Before this round of cards was played, I had already thrown away Wang Zha. Some holes get deeper and deeper as they are filled. Then I can only leave it blank. There is one last resort left: refuse to admit it. "I don't know. " "Have no idea? "My wife's words were murderous. "Do you believe I would go to a place like that? I think spending 35 yuan to sit in a coffee shop for an hour is expensive, so how can I spend thousands of yuan to do that 5-minute thing? "I'm ashamed of myself. "That's too much. You have to have a limit when you praise yourself. How can you have 5 minutes? "She added a last-ditch shot. I light a cigarette. Silence. "You have no right to remain silent. " At this time the phone rang, it was Li Jianjun. "Put it out. "My wife said. The call was connected, and Li Jianjun said on the phone: "I have a lighter that is missing. It says "XX Leisure Club" on it. Is it at your place? " Me: "Yes, yes. Here I am! " Li Jianjun: "Great, I thought it would be terrible if my wife found it if I left it at my house. " I looked at my wife proudly, and my eyes said: You see, this lighter really belongs to Li Jianjun! Li Jianjun said again: "Next time we go there, don't take any lighters from the store. " Bang, the phone hung up. I know, I'm about to die too.

What's wrong with writing hundreds of chapters for a world? A world is such a huge data. It's already good to be able to write a few hundred chapters, but does it have to be a dozen or twenty chapters for a world? I don't know what you are reading about writing a world in these dozens of chapters. Are you just trying to watch the protagonist travel to this world to show off and pick up girls? Even if the time travel is completed, you can play and then repeat it to the next world and do the same thing again. You only read one detail in one book. It is really sad. I hope the author writes carefully and doesn't care about those people who are used to eating fast food. Just ensure the quality of the book. Come on.

You have 34 hundred chapters in a world? Do you plan to finish writing it? Who has so much leisure to pursue? Just a suggestion, don't think too hard!

This is the best Zhutenliu novel I have ever read. From the description of the first world, it can be seen that the author has a good understanding of history and his writing style is also very good. The protagonist is scheming and calculating. All in all, this is a novel in which the supporting characters and the protagonist have IQs. At least it is much better than those novels that only pretend to be cool. Also, I like the eunuch protagonist very much, because it means that there is no heroine, and it is better to watch without a heroine. I also hope that the author will always be a bachelor in the setting. Don't ask me why, because usually those who write about heroines either have a harem or they write the heroine is too stupid. Not to mention causing trouble for the protagonist, she acts coquettishly all day long, which is disgusting to watch, and the protagonist indulges her so much, so I usually abandon the book after seeing these plots. Well, from reading to listening to books, I think listening to books is good, but it is not included in the reading time... In short, the daily recommendation vote is given to the author, come on! [Emot=default,01/]