The Rise of the Doomsday Spirit

Well, originally this book was first published on Qidian. There were more than 200 comments there. None of them said anything about my Holy Mother. Instead, they scolded me for being a mistreater. To be honest, it was very convenient. Others have read dozens of chapters and scolded me for being a mistreater. I admit it. You have come to a conclusion after reading two chapters? Originally, I was too lazy to care about this kind of SB comments. I didn't understand the author, so what was there to say? But when it affected others, I had to speak out. The protagonist only started shouting when he was the first one to enter the hole. Now you're attracting firepower? Laughing, please read it carefully. I blame the author for not reading carefully. How can such a person survive in the apocalypse? I would like to trouble you to read it and then ask how the protagonist survived. I will always delete such unrealistic remarks. This time I will just leave it there and treat it as a joke

The concept and writing are both good, and the plot seems a bit cliche, but the biggest problem is the power system, which is actually a bit broken. The protagonist is too weak, and is too weak to be a Pokémon trainer. A Pokémon trained intensively by a trainer is absolutely fine. Easily defeat multiple wild Pokémon of the same level. This can be shown in any Pokémon-related works. It is very simple. In the animation, Xiaogang can tell at a glance that a certain baby is developing very well, but it is basically impossible for wild Pokémon to get a good and balanced development. Training conditions, the second is skills. Pokmon skills in the wild are basically relatively simple, and many skills need training to be learned. Pokmon with a trainer can basically master all or most of the skills that can be used at the current stage. Even excellent trainers can let their Pokmon master unique skills, and Pokmon in the wild can basically master one-third. Once you have a trainer, most of them will quickly master the skills at the current stage through targeted training. No matter which Pokmon works, the newly captured Pokmon has passed the special This is evidenced by the fact that the strength of the training will increase exponentially in a very short period of time. It is impossible to increase the level to 30 levels by practicing behind closed doors in a month. The third is tactics. The tactics of wild elves are mostly used for hunting or escaping. Even if they fight, they will only fight against a limited number of elves around the territory. Fighting, and the consequences are that the tactics are outrageous, and you know nothing about other types of attributes and Pokémon you have never seen before. You don't even know whether the dog on the opposite side can breathe fire or spit water. It's so unprepared to face a trainer elf with such good development (high attributes) in a sudden situation. ) You are an all-rounder with high morale, dirty tactics, strong adaptability, long-range attack, melee attack, and confusion attack. You have faced opponents with extremely rich experience in fighting various Pokémon, and you can still fight them. I can only say that you are really a self-taught genius. I really can't help it. It's unimaginable that a veteran who is wallowing on the battlefield is beaten so hard by a new recruit who only spends the whole day at the training ground and three roommates in the next door room practicing military gymnastics. And in your article, all the Pokémon in the wild have lost a stroke. How embarrassing is it? You will know it after you finish writing it. The second drawback is the Tanabata Blue Bird. Do you know the concept of a level 35 dragon Pokémon? Being beaten up by a bunch of ten-level babies, are you kidding me? Special chapter Fengyuan Flying Gym Leader Naqi challenges you for the first time. Her Tanabata Blue Bird is only level 33. Of course you can also understand that she is hiding her strength, but thinking about the levels of the Four Heavenly Kings and Champions, I think the Pokémon of the gym leader should be around level 40. What is the level of the gym leader? I think Needless to say, the top can suppress the ground, and the bottom can educate new trainers. As long as no major changes are made, a city can be easily conquered. When the Four Heavenly Kings champion Yulongdu attacked the Golden City in the special chapter, each gym owner was able to defeat hundreds of wild tribes. One against a hundred is not an exaggeration. Your Tanabata Blue Bird is really pitiful. Even if he is a baby in the wild, he is still strong after breaking the defense. A dragon sucking you 100 will only turn him into a scum. How can these younger brothers operate like this? Thirdly, regarding the strength of quasi-gods, I haven't written this yet. Please don't write about it. It's still about Yulongdu's attack on Golden City. Go read the comics. Two Hacker Dragons, the sea has been overturned. They can do everything they want. It's the same as natural disasters. Yes, quasi-gods. The reason why gods and mythical beasts carry the word "divine" is not just because of their high race values in the game. It represents the power of gods. I don't even need to look at it to know that if it weren't for the sharp-toothed land shark, it would be a piece of trash that is about 50-50 equal to a wild dog on the roadside. Just take a look at the dragon-slaying warriors in the fourth game. The reason why the dragon attribute is at the top of the food chain is that it is absolutely powerful. You, after all, a Mali Luli defeated a blood-winged flying dragon. I am afraid you are not thinking about it. The absolute difference in strength cannot be seen even with 100 restraints. If every fairy type can be trained to level 60 to become a dragon-slaying warrior, then all the quasi-gods will be laid off. I heard that your Hack Dragon can control the wind and rain? The three bubble-blowing Mariluli in the pond on the roadside will beat you up every minute and call you daddy. There seems to be no such terrifying scene in any work until now. I think the so-called suppression of the dragon type by the fairies should be reflected in the fact that multiple elves with fairy attributes can repel a single dragon predator. It should be more realistic. After all, in the face of doomsday natural disasters like tornadoes, dragon stars, and wind-calling volcanic eruptions, there is no difference between your fairy wind and the northwest wind when you open the window. I can understand the author's idea. If the enemy is too weak, the plot will easily jump and become mindless. But if the protagonist is too weak and the enemies are all geniuses, the plot will actually be even more mindless. You want to slow down the pace, but don't be fooled by the enemy. Even wild dogs on the roadside can give you a 1v5. Wild monkeys and monsters can break through on the spot. The younger brother sacrifices his life to protect the boss from evolving. Pokmon is full of wisdom, but he is not Zhuge Liang. If he had this level of organization and thinking, I think humans would have become extinct long ago. Do you think Pokmon is an immortal and can be so smart? It is still possible for domesticated ones to be influenced by humans. In the wild, I guess, I still say the same thing, your wild Pokémon are all born with fighting geniuses, tactical geniuses, and military commanders. I think scientists are not as smart as Pokémon. A wild monkey can do self-study in ten or eight days and find out that this crystal can help him evolve incorrectly. What a genius. I have no place to complain. Really, this genius scene is as good as the special episode where Team Rocket needles the armored Tyrannosaurus to evolve Hammer Xiaoxia, and Team Rocket is a cross between Kanto, Chengdu, Fengyuan, and even Sinnoh have tentacles. Inside, they have Boss Sakaki who is comparable to the champion, and four cadres who are comparable to the Four Heavenly Kings. Outside, there is the financial supply of Shirufu Group, a world-class enterprise. The monsters hidden under the alliance took countless years to develop. To find out such a small number of immature products, and actually ask a genius monkey in the wild to create it, this is not just a far-fetched plot, this is simply creating ups and downs, it is too deliberate

This book is not like other fics, but it is very realistic. Just like the previous pictures, the creature came to a strange territory and wanted to confirm its status. Although it is very angry for us when it kisses a human, it is very normal for them. After all, the territory we live in is not taken from other animals? I hope the back will be as beautiful as the front (๑•.•๑)

Come on, author＾0＾~I hope you don't want eunuchs

Thank you to the author, this book is so beautiful.

This update is a joke, update the previous one and then delete it

Author, why don't you update it?

I know the protagonist is weak in the early stage, but why do I feel like he doesn't even have the ability to protect himself?

I like the author, he has a very bold imagination, I will follow him

You should add some to get a chance encounter with a human being and pick up a Poké Ball out of thin air! Or some people have been recognized by the elves, or they have awakened the power of waveguide or something. Of course, there must be no protagonist in their adventure. After all, what the protagonist gets is memory and knowledge.