Top Luck: Leading the Family to Cultivate Immortality

In the past few days, many book friends have commented and complained, and there have been many comments from readers with fierce words, which shocked me as a newbie! Maybe it's because the author's writing is really not good, and it's his first time writing a novel, so he has neither an outline nor a detailed outline, so he just relies on his passion for writing. The first part was fine, with less content, not many characters, and no storyline, so there weren't many poisonous points. But later on, many places were indeed illogical. I did a very bad job in this regard. I admit it and I accept criticism! Reading and commenting on books is the most basic freedom of every book lover, and expressing one's own opinions is the most basic right. As the author of this book, I certainly have no right to interfere. But I also hope that everyone can be gentle when complaining. Writing a book is not easy. If you don't like this book, you don't have to read it. Before it is put on the shelves, the content is free. You really shouldn't be so excited! The author will also adjust his mentality. Although I am very shocked, I still want to persevere and continue writing. After all, there are many book friends who have been supporting me. I don't want to give up so easily. Finally, the author is an adult and will not delete comments like children. I hope everyone will continue to support me. Thank you everyone!

The protagonist practiced Qi at the fifth level and flew 100 miles in half a day, using up half of his spiritual power. He was so awesome and so fast, haha, he was about to catch up with me on my bicycle.

The first one reads that the world is divided into nine states, each covering an area of ​​about tens of millions of miles. Wouldn't it be like fighting in a pond when arriving at Jindan Yuanying?

I wish you a great sale, borrow the treasure to push down the book, and hope that Haihan's "Family Cultivation of Immortality: The Rise of Humanity" will be stable and passionate, with online IQ and no system.

You have only reached the fifth level of Qi training for several years in the family. As soon as you left the family, you were promoted to two levels in one year. Isn't it too fast? Moreover, a cave with tens of thousands of years of ancient cultivation only has elixirs for the Qi training period. Which medicinal materials are only two hundred years old and have not been available for thousands of years.

However, this article will not be like a certain article, where one person can ascend to heaven. Because he is the protagonist and has a golden finger, so the protagonist's relatives are obviously not qualified, and the protagonist also uses resources to pile up their cultivation. In the end, each of the protagonist's relatives has cultivated to an advanced level and has a long lifespan. The protagonist and his relatives who really don't like this don't have to work hard. The protagonist will send elixirs and weapons, and they don't have to worry about death. They can climb to the top directly. I feel that there are better stories about immortal cultivators whose protagonists have relatives alive. In the end, they can all achieve enlightenment, chickens and dogs can ascend to heaven. It would be better for the protagonist to have no relatives at the beginning, only clan members.

He has great talent, he boasts awesome skills, and he is still an alchemist. His level of improvement is too slow, and it still hurts his body when he increases his magic power? , Others don't have it, this Tianpin technique is too rubbish The combat power is too wide and there are too many levels.

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The protagonist is over 40 years old. As the only second spiritual root monk in the family, his cultivation speed is too slow. He has heaven-level skills and 10 treasures to assist him. I am over 40 years old and still have four levels of foundation building. People of the three spiritual roots have built foundations. The older generation has nine levels of foundation building and seven levels of foundation building. The protagonist, a cheating genius, still has four levels of foundation building. It's so unreasonable,

I searched for this book for a long time but couldn't find it (the book's name has been changed from its original name: The Lin Family's Road to Immortality).