Sword Bayonet Shadow

First, I will write about the childhood sweethearts Brahma and Lan Yan, having fun and having so much fun! Then, based on the itinerary of the two people, the camera was pulled back home and the bloody scene unfolded. The happy and beautiful childhood life was interrupted. How could the two children not have a hatred for the thugs? This writing just corresponds to the title of this chapter.

I would argue that it is better to set it as a title, which serves to point out the main idea of ​​the novel, but it is still very insightful and practical. Use the reverse order method to introduce attractions. The description of the scenery in the opening chapter is very vivid, comparing trees to people who are about to die, giving the audience a sense of desolation, and laying the foundation for the tragic experience of the Brahma family.

The third chapter first writes about Brahma going to Lan Yan's house to find Lan Yan. After some discussion of revenge, the two parted ways, but it was a bit abrupt. The description of the scene when they parted was a little blank. If there were any instructions between the two, some description of the scenery could be added to heighten the emotion. If there is no explanation here, it can be regarded as suspense, and it can also be supplemented in the form of memories in later chapters. The focus of this chapter is on Brahma practicing martial arts and practicing Tai Chi. The details of the movements are described very carefully, the picture is very strong, and the scenery is also included, but it is too simple. The overall effect is very good, keep going!