Fat House Pirate and Mermaid Girl
About This Novel
"Ace, tell me your father's name." The tall man with a hearty smile flashed in Ace's mind on the execution platform. His eyes gradually became firmer, and then he slowly raised his head and said loudly "My father is Moonlight Moria!" His proud voice spread throughout the world through the phone bug.
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Official(2)Scraped 3d ago
I vomited, anyone can be Aite's son.
? ? Two stars first, we will change it when the time comes.
Your chapters 1 and 2 are not coherent at all, even if you write it as hearing the voice, falling into memories, and then writing it down, those are the coherent points. Overall, it's okay. What you wrote should be another version of Moonlight Moria. After the defeat, he regained his confidence.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 3d ago
I vomited, anyone can be Aite's son.
? ? Two stars first, we will change it when the time comes.
Your chapters 1 and 2 are not coherent at all, even if you write it as hearing the voice, falling into memories, and then writing it down, those are the coherent points. Overall, it's okay. What you wrote should be another version of Moonlight Moria. After the defeat, he regained his confidence.
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