Super Seminary Ice Angel Feather Boy

Super Seminary Ice Angel Feather Boy

by Xizi Falls Into My Arms

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51Kwords
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ℳঞonly the Gentleness of ꦿꦿ꧔ꦿ᭄34mo ago

The author is also quite awesome. He opened both of them. It's amazing. It's awesome.

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ℳঞonly the Gentleness of ꦿꦿ꧔ꦿ᭄34mo ago

Damn (*`へ´*) I was speechless when I saw the ninth one 🤦‍♂️ Let's not talk about Angel Yan's age. It doesn't mean that he is matched with the protagonist, but also with the power of the galaxy. It means that he wants to follow the reality of one woman marrying several husbands. Aren't angels a pair for life? This super god is so speechless

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Yuge34mo ago

Don't copy the plot of the original work, and the word count shouldn't be too low. Make it more relevant to the protagonist. It doesn't make sense to just rewrite the original plot. The author should think about it.

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Yuge34mo ago

And the quotation marks are used blindly, so be careful.

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Yuge34mo ago

I'm currently reading Chapter 8. How should I put it, the writing is a bit like reading the plot directly, and there is no sense of immersion. Let's not talk about the plot first. The main reason is that the reading has no sense of immersion. I suggest you learn from the writing methods of other excellent novels to improve it.

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