Tianlong: How Did I Become a Rhythm Master?

No wonder I rushed to the street and wrote so verbosely. It was more than thirty chapters before I started to get the Beiming Divine Skill to practice. If you write about fan fiction, then just do it as a fan fiction, whether it is original or non-contextual, all kinds of hooks like Ya Shenlong are out there. Moreover, the protagonist's first thought when he gets the magic power is not to survive and develop, but to go out and have fun, and then waves of troubles come, and finally he pretends to be a slap in the face.

Like Duan Yu, he kowtowed more than a thousand times. He always wanted to be in the Beggar Clan and didn't want to improve his martial arts. Anyway, it wasn't as exciting as being a time traveler.

Anyway, the main focus is Lang. After dozens of chapters, the Dantian was broken before I thought about getting the Beiming Magic. Then the inner strength didn't rise and started to wander again, but no one could defeat it. I ran away everywhere and got injured. I almost died many times.

I think it's quite interesting, but the arrangement of the protagonist's life experience is a bit strange to me. Although the original work did not mention Quan Guanqing's life experience, the author made up a story about the son of the Mingjiao leader and linked it to the Yanmen Pass incident, which still made me feel a little sudden

The biggest feature of the Beiming Divine Skill is to absorb people's inner energy and turn it into Beiming's true energy. But what did you think of it? Duan Yu trained his hands after reading the original work, and even Jiumozhi could absorb it. However, this was written as a piece of trash. After the protagonist practiced it completely, he couldn't even beat Baby Gan, and he was pinched by Baby Gan like a chicken. The original Lingbo Weibu can be practiced without any internal strength. The more you practice this Qing Gong, the stronger your internal strength becomes. If you can increase your internal strength, you still need to have a high level of internal strength before you can practice it. Isn't this nonsense?

Too poisonous! Let me just say one thing: would a modern person really be shocked by the statue of Li Qiushui? Emotional? How is that possible? ! Are you a congenital emotive holy body? Duan Yu is emotional because he has never seen a naked woman, he is still a chick and has too little experience. However, modern people check their mobile phones every day and there are as many exercise videos on small websites as they want. What woman has he not seen? ! The author wrote the protagonist too lowly

What the hell? Tai Chi achievement, Bei Ming Sheng Gong. It's so funny. How poisonous this is. Zhang Sanfeng has reached the pinnacle of Tai Chi. No one else can practice it. Everyone can practice it. It's so funny. How poisonous this is. It's really poisonous.

It's hard to calm down, really. I've read a lot of fanfics, and although the early stages were a bit rough, the writing and original plot are very good. It can be seen that the author is talented. Why don't you, the author, take a look at the protagonist Wu Yazi's Kung Fu and Mu Wanqing's Kung Lao Kung Fu. I doubt that the chapters in between were written by you at all. Directly become a brainless and cool article. It collapsed into a complete mess.

I thought it was pretty good at the beginning, the writing was quite detailed and rigorous. There are too many settings added later. The author exaggerates the Xiaoyao Sect and adds a lot of inexplicable settings. This is barely acceptable until Li Qiu Shui appears and Tong Lao passes on the Kung Fu Mu Wan Qing, and the combat power collapses. I suspect that the author wrote this book to promote the Xiaoyao sect.

This is a retarded novel. You actually imagined that the treacherous ministers of the Song Dynasty gave salt to the beggar gang. Even if they lost half of the country, their money was not as important as their money. At the same time, they lost the salt franchise and frontline material transportation. This would save a lot of money and water. I'll let you be the prime minister.