Heavens: Illusions Materialize Starting from Douluo

How should I put it? I feel that the author did not make good use of the protagonist Goldfinger, but he made the protagonist look very smart. Since alchemy and stellar martial arts can be manifested, why not just cultivate immortality directly? The protagonist should be Chinese and often read novels. He should have a very good understanding of the immortality cultivation system, and the immortality cultivation system is very complete and has a high upper limit. He can refine elixirs, weapons, formations, etc., And is almost omnipotent without any shortcomings. Either the author should stop making the protagonist look very smart, or the author should re-open a new book. I feel that directly embodying Superman is much better than alchemy and stellar martial arts.

It's okay at the front, but it falls apart at the back. The previous settings are enough, and there are more to be added later. The protagonist felt like he had done nothing until the end and was just wordy. I know you want to portray the protagonist in more detail, but to be honest, really, the one you created in the front is already pretty good. When it comes to the latter one, the reasonableness and the magnanimity of a strong man. To be honest, you should write in the details instead of using a lot of wordy words like the protagonist. The following content is always watery and there is not much content. It is always preaching and trying to shape the protagonist through language. It is really unnecessary and the dialogue can be reduced appropriately. Especially when Xiao Wu and Tang San turned against each other, there really should have been less such confrontations. It can only be said that this is just to make up the word count, and it does not help the portrayal of the protagonist. Instead, it just feels awkward and annoying. You can see that what is written later is long and long. I hope the author can change it

The plot is okay, but the protagonist is too preachy. Originally, the protagonist is a hypocritical individual, but he insists on accusing others from the moral high ground. Moreover, the originally very simple plot has to be interspersed with messy secondary settings and long paragraphs of theory, which makes the viewer very tired.

Do you want to accept Bibi Dong? If so, I'll run away. White-eyed wolf really won't like her, it's so disgusting.

The second setting is inexplicable. Angels and Rakshasa are both Shura's wives, so for Shura, the original work is my inheritor and the inheritor of my two wives...😂😂😂

Always verbose, too much nonsense

Um, it feels a bit awkward, and it feels like I'm trying to force myself to pretend.

It feels okay, but it looks a bit tiring, long and long

Everything else is okay. The world of Divine Seal Throne is in the galaxy next to Dou Yi. It's understandable because of the spatial relationship! Peerless Tang Sect Zai Dou Yi obviously said that the relationship is time, but insisted on turning it into a space relationship! What is the logic of this? If Dou Yi and Dou Er are in the same universe, there is only one possibility! This universe is just an ornamental fish tank!

Does anyone understand it? I was confused for a year at the beginning, especially when Qian Renxue came to take over the protagonist's role, the plot felt a bit outrageous.