Dragons: Return of the Fire Thief

I really wish I had to write a few paragraphs about how smooth the dog's fur is when I pass by it. The whole article is full of pretentious and sophisticated words, and the main plot line is not at all. Xiami went home and watched Fenrir for a whole chapter, and the protagonist played games and chatted with Lu for a chapter and a half. The main character and his sister take the subway out to get a good chapter. The main thing here is to put aside the long nonsense and the historical description of the appearance and environment. The fragmented serious dialogue and interaction only advance a little bit of the plot. It is really so watery that it makes people physically uncomfortable.

You've already written a fanfic, so what's the use of writing an enhanced version of Lu Mingfei? In addition, you deliberately imitated the green-faced beast, but the result is just a copycat style of writing, which makes a large number of environmental descriptions seem unclear.

It's really important to read new books. I ask all those who want to read books to do so as late as possible. Thanks to the author_(:з∠)_

In terms of combat power, although the bloodline is S-level, I feel that it is exaggerated. The author's description of combat power once made me think that the protagonist can only be regarded as super A; in terms of writing style, the author has made great achievements, but too many descriptions seem to be procrastinating, and there are many descriptions with unclear meaning; the character... It is difficult to evaluate, after all, there are all kinds of people.

Just because the heroine is Xia Mi, I have to watch it.

The writing is good, but there is too much description, which may not be the place for the essay.

At first, I read this book mainly because of the character Xia Mi. My favorite among the Dragon Clan is Xia Mi. I am not a traditional Chu Xia fan. After all, I am reading a fan novel. As long as Xia Mi is the heroine, it will be fine. After reading so many dragon fics, this one is the most amazing to me, because the character of Xia Mi he portrayed fits the image of the original work very well. Maybe Xia Mi is a little bit love-minded, but Yakamundo has the dignity of a dragon king, which is like a schizophrenia. She has human nature and dragon nature, but Xia Mi is Jiamunde, and Yakamundo is also Xia Mi. In many dragon fandoms, Xia Mi doesn't look like her, but looks like a female version of Fingel. She is a character of contradictions, and I'm glad to see this in this book.

The front is fine, but the White King chapter has more than 200 chapters, and there are only 500 chapters in total, which is a bit overwhelming...

Chapter 12, hasn't the author read the original work? Didn't you know that you have to sign a confidentiality document to reveal things related to the Dragon Clan?

This book will not have a tragic ending for the main original characters who are not bloodthirsty. Even if it is temporarily offline without description, it is still necessary for the plot. In any case, it will not exceed one volume, and a hint will be given in the author's words. The book is not an invincible novel with smooth sailing in the middle. There will be setbacks, losses, and opponents that the protagonist cannot solve. The protagonist will be sad and sad, but he is always growing, and the turning points follow him like a shadow. The ending of the outline is also preferred. There are a lot of foreshadowings buried in this book, but I will specifically mark the foreshadowing chapters when I mention them later. At the same time, this mark will not affect the VIP chapter subscription fees and the previous reading experience. I have paid special attention to this.