Takeji

The author gives you five-star praise and continues to delete the comment.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. One hundred chapters later and it's still the first level, and I'm drunk too

If you are a savage, you should not have a name. With the surname of Shennong and Jiang, you call yourself a savage?

The writing is okay! I hope it won't be unfinished, and I won't write it again as I write it.

I tried poison for more than 300 chapters. I really can't stand it. The writing is okay. It just explains the exercises, magical powers, arrival, etc. Throughout the whole article. Secondly, at a very low level, he has mastered all the most powerful magical powers, such as Taishen True Fire, innate xx magical powers, and great magical powers. Chaos Sword Qi is the most awesome physical training technique and the most awesome spiritual training technique, and the explanation is very awesome and detailed (it's actually water). After more than 300 chapters, it seems like you have to fight for several lives to resist the Nine Dragon Divine Fire Shield. It's like grabbing a dagger with a phone in your hand. It takes days and nights of hard work to win the battle, but in fact, the combat power has already collapsed. What a waste of money

From the moment Xincheng was conquered by the black mist, I felt it was unreasonable. Xinzai was as strong as the protagonist, and the monthly official salary there was so low that he couldn't even afford the Calming Pill, which cost 10 crystals. Just look at it and you will know that natural disasters occur every few months, and there are slaves and savages there. How many people have to die? Do you think nobles would spend money to protect their slaves? How do savages live? In Chapter 166, the protagonist Jianguo, there is a natural disaster within the city of Xin. How come there are savage tribes outside who have taken refuge? How did they survive the black mist? Do they have money to buy a tranquilizer pill? How to avoid other natural disasters? Who cares about slaves and savages in this cannibalistic world? Also, was it said at the beginning that the exercises were controlled by forces? Why are the savages outside all cultivated, but they are still old, weak, women and children? How do they survive in the Falling Star Territory until now? Didn't you say that you can't go to Xincheng without great merit? Why did they appear in the Xincheng area?

The system, creative writing and content of this book are excellent. In terms of the setting of this book, now that the concept of apotheosis has become widely known, the author breaks through tradition and competes with all races for hegemony. The integration of the tribulation system of the century is undoubtedly successful. But it was still greatly affected. For example, myself, when I first saw this setting of the Gods, if it wasn't for the book shortage, I would never have come in to read it, and I would never have had the opportunity to see the author's great innovation and development. In my opinion, some aspects of this book are very similar to The Catastrophe of All Nations, but in many aspects it is still inferior. For example, in terms of plot, it is not as ups and downs as The Catastrophe of Ten Thousand Clans, and there are still deficiencies in various conflicts, climaxes, and character creation. Many times it is too bland. People often say that the more wine you taste, the more mellow and mellow it becomes. However, this book gives people a feeling of satiety, which is equivalent to dining out. It is edible, healthy and nutritious, but it is definitely not as good as that of Xiao Zao. The biggest problem with this book is that it has collapsed at the end of the book. You can feel that the author doesn't want to write anymore. In the last one or two million words, the protagonist suddenly rises. Especially after the protagonist proposes a plan to cycle the water in the three realms of human race, heaven, man and ghost (a good idea), the book suddenly rises and rises again. It has the same problem as The Tribulation of Ten Thousand Races, but the author does not have the clear-cut world view of other people, and there are many, but the author has very few. There are also holes that the author can't fill. I especially like the book Perfect World because the holes that are dug are basically filled in, and the feeling of not being filled is just right. However, the holes that the author dug give people the feeling that the plot is not full of flesh and blood. I won't summarize it, I'm sleepy. In short, this is a work above the standard, with a perfect score of 100, I think it just reached 80. 60 Is pass, 70 is average, 80 is good, 90 is excellent, and 100 is perfect.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say. However, Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed updates, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

From what I've read so far, it's a good-looking book. The author has good ideas and writing style, and he also puts his heart into it. I found it quite enjoyable while watching it, and I didn't find any problems that would affect my reading experience. I hope that the world view and some details will not collapse later.

No, it makes me sick. I'm pregnant with the ocean. You are all water.