Douluo: the God of Inherited Time and Space, Reversal of the Emperor of Time
by Whoever Submits The Manuscript Will Be Loyal To Him
About This Novel
[Multiple women] [Princes] [Rich plot] [Attention to detail] [Not with the group] Yun Duo traveled through the Douluo world and became a hereditary prince of a different surname in the Tian Dou Empire. Not only did he awaken the "Angel of Time" Emperor Keke and the "Angel of Space" Emperor Kuangkuang who were stronger than the Seraphim, he also inherited the inheritance of the God of Time and the God of Space. Moreover, he has become in-laws with the Dugu family and Tianshui family, and they are also his supporters. Oh, Yanzi, Bing'er, Yue'er, although the three of you are my fiancée, isn't it not good for you to be like this? Damn it, Qian Renxue, you... What do you want to do to me? You... You... You, you actually want to be a Chamber Douluo? Star Luo Empire, Haotian Sect, you plotted to kill my parents for your own selfish interests, you already have a way to die... Let's see how Yun Duo uses his own advantages to quickly grow up and avenge his deceased parents... [Meeting legitimate abuse of Tang Xiaosan, Anzi and others, multiple female protagonists, tentatively selected Dugu Yan, Ye Lingling, Shui Bing'er, Shui Yue'er, we will see the situation later. ]
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Official(50)Scraped 5d ago
I don't know where you got it from. God Shura was created by human beings who ascended to the divine realm. He didn't think it was created by setting it up later, right?
Which god of time and god of space are you writing about?
Except for the Dragon King of Time and the Dragon King of Space, who are god kings, the God of Time and the God of Space are only first-level gods. The power of the Dragon King comes from the Dragon God, and the Dragon God should also be regarded as the God of Time and the God of Space. As for the other novels of the Three Young Masters of the Tang Family, they are not as good as Douluo.
The pace is really slow and watery
Do you dare to believe that it's already Chapter 20? From the time of awakening the martial soul to Chapter 20, not even a day has passed. Others will at least receive the main plot in Chapter 20. He is still arguing with NPCs in Chapter 20 of this book. It's really outrageous.
Oops, I came to see Douluo Continent. The picture is simple. The world of Douluo is simple and uncomplicated. Who doesn't want to be a titled Douluo or a god? There are also fighting scenes in it. Everyone should like it, including the original beauties and the ones who haven't appeared. It can be said that they are not ugly. Although I have only watched Dou Yi, whether it is in line with the original work or a radically changed one, but you have such a big world view and a bunch of settings, you shouldn't write about Douluo. It's really tiring to watch and it's a confusing mess.
This setting of yours is awesome! The basics of Douluo Continent have been raised to countless levels. I just have a question: Does Douluo Continent deserve to have the setting of the Five Innate Empresses? If Douluo Continent had the Xiantian Wu Tai at the beginning, it would basically be on the same level as the prehistoric world. Even in the shabby world, it would still be comparable to half the sky! The five innate ladies of yours have come out, you are so awesome! Admire! You win, you are better than the Potato God 👍
There are 330,000 words, 100,000 words of setting, 150,000 words of supporting characters, and 50,000 words of description of the protagonist. (Maybe it's an exaggeration, but that's how it felt to me.) The protagonist has too few roles and has no sense of presence. Mainly what you write is fan fiction. Not a group portrait. Group portraits are not something novices can master. It doesn't really matter that you have written so many languages to set the path. It can be said to be innovation. But your writing is so poor that you can't handle the main character's role. Too little, resulting in no sense of existence and no sense of substitution. Then you're taking too big a step and hitting your balls. The details mentioned in the introduction are like Luo Liba Suo to readers. There are a lot of settings and supporting roles. The protagonist's role is squeezed into nowhere. This doesn't mean paying attention to details, it means you got too excited and forgot about the main character. The details are for you to add settings. I'm not asking you to write about the supporting characters in the original work. We don't want to read them. To be honest, who cares how Dugu Yanye obtained the soul ring coldly. You just wrote three of these? (It seems even more than that.)
The background is messy, the settings are messy, and the interpersonal relationships are messy. It feels like plagiarism in Douluo's skin. Changing the settings randomly is not called fan fiction, it's called plagiarism. Just like Cow World copied Minecraft back then. The source code of the calcium carbide system is exactly the same as the redstone system of Minecraft. I didn't bother to change the name. Why don't you come quickly and thank Shen Nong?
More updates and arrangements to add heroines Zhu Zhuqing and Zhu Zhuyun😘😘
It's so long-winded. Who reads the introduction when reading a novel? Fei's introduction is so detailed. Being a second-generation entrepreneur is all about the introduction.
It's just a vision, how come everyone knows that the protagonist has awakened his twin martial souls?
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Official(50)Scraped 5d ago
I don't know where you got it from. God Shura was created by human beings who ascended to the divine realm. He didn't think it was created by setting it up later, right?
Which god of time and god of space are you writing about?
Except for the Dragon King of Time and the Dragon King of Space, who are god kings, the God of Time and the God of Space are only first-level gods. The power of the Dragon King comes from the Dragon God, and the Dragon God should also be regarded as the God of Time and the God of Space. As for the other novels of the Three Young Masters of the Tang Family, they are not as good as Douluo.
The pace is really slow and watery
Do you dare to believe that it's already Chapter 20? From the time of awakening the martial soul to Chapter 20, not even a day has passed. Others will at least receive the main plot in Chapter 20. He is still arguing with NPCs in Chapter 20 of this book. It's really outrageous.
Oops, I came to see Douluo Continent. The picture is simple. The world of Douluo is simple and uncomplicated. Who doesn't want to be a titled Douluo or a god? There are also fighting scenes in it. Everyone should like it, including the original beauties and the ones who haven't appeared. It can be said that they are not ugly. Although I have only watched Dou Yi, whether it is in line with the original work or a radically changed one, but you have such a big world view and a bunch of settings, you shouldn't write about Douluo. It's really tiring to watch and it's a confusing mess.
This setting of yours is awesome! The basics of Douluo Continent have been raised to countless levels. I just have a question: Does Douluo Continent deserve to have the setting of the Five Innate Empresses? If Douluo Continent had the Xiantian Wu Tai at the beginning, it would basically be on the same level as the prehistoric world. Even in the shabby world, it would still be comparable to half the sky! The five innate ladies of yours have come out, you are so awesome! Admire! You win, you are better than the Potato God 👍
There are 330,000 words, 100,000 words of setting, 150,000 words of supporting characters, and 50,000 words of description of the protagonist. (Maybe it's an exaggeration, but that's how it felt to me.) The protagonist has too few roles and has no sense of presence. Mainly what you write is fan fiction. Not a group portrait. Group portraits are not something novices can master. It doesn't really matter that you have written so many languages to set the path. It can be said to be innovation. But your writing is so poor that you can't handle the main character's role. Too little, resulting in no sense of existence and no sense of substitution. Then you're taking too big a step and hitting your balls. The details mentioned in the introduction are like Luo Liba Suo to readers. There are a lot of settings and supporting roles. The protagonist's role is squeezed into nowhere. This doesn't mean paying attention to details, it means you got too excited and forgot about the main character. The details are for you to add settings. I'm not asking you to write about the supporting characters in the original work. We don't want to read them. To be honest, who cares how Dugu Yanye obtained the soul ring coldly. You just wrote three of these? (It seems even more than that.)
The background is messy, the settings are messy, and the interpersonal relationships are messy. It feels like plagiarism in Douluo's skin. Changing the settings randomly is not called fan fiction, it's called plagiarism. Just like Cow World copied Minecraft back then. The source code of the calcium carbide system is exactly the same as the redstone system of Minecraft. I didn't bother to change the name. Why don't you come quickly and thank Shen Nong?
More updates and arrangements to add heroines Zhu Zhuqing and Zhu Zhuyun😘😘
It's so long-winded. Who reads the introduction when reading a novel? Fei's introduction is so detailed. Being a second-generation entrepreneur is all about the introduction.
It's just a vision, how come everyone knows that the protagonist has awakened his twin martial souls?
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