My Ex-boyfriend Said He Came Back from Cultivating Immortality
by First Love Is As Bright As Summer Flowers
About This Novel
After being missing for ten years, he told me that he was going to cultivate immortality!
What Readers Think
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Official(8)Scraped 23d ago
Too messy
Author, the plot you wrote is too confusing. Some of it has no basic logic. It is just nonsense. I have read more than 20 chapters and should withdraw it.
The old books are probably all gone.
The emotions are still as delicate as before, and the panorama is painted bit by bit.
In one word, "super messy"
The writing is illogical and messy, yet it's still recommended.
It took ten years to refine qi. This qualification is awesome🐂🐂🐂
. .
I don't dare to look, I'm afraid I'll lose half of what I've seen
Look at this boyfriend who came back from cultivating immortality
Ha ha
I can't even understand what he is writing
The writing is average, with a messy preface and no follow-up.
When writing a book, first clarify the outline, and then the order of events. The writing is too messy and makes it uncomfortable to read.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(8)Scraped 23d ago
Too messy
Author, the plot you wrote is too confusing. Some of it has no basic logic. It is just nonsense. I have read more than 20 chapters and should withdraw it.
The old books are probably all gone.
The emotions are still as delicate as before, and the panorama is painted bit by bit.
In one word, "super messy"
The writing is illogical and messy, yet it's still recommended.
It took ten years to refine qi. This qualification is awesome🐂🐂🐂
. .
I don't dare to look, I'm afraid I'll lose half of what I've seen
Look at this boyfriend who came back from cultivating immortality
Ha ha
I can't even understand what he is writing
The writing is average, with a messy preface and no follow-up.
When writing a book, first clarify the outline, and then the order of events. The writing is too messy and makes it uncomfortable to read.
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