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"Nagato, dad, I might die." In the simple cabin, Ise said to his cheap son. The beginning is on hell difficulty. Faced with a certain fate and a certain death situation, can the magical analysis system break the situation? "Start analyzing the blood of the body." "The genes have potential and can be deeply analyzed. The excellent gene fragments that can be awakened and activated are as follows." "Water chakra, earth chakra, awakening the advanced talent genes of the Senju clan, creation (SS), precise chakra control (B), wood escape (SS), strong vitality (A), etc." "Start analyzing and merging." "Wood escape has been analyzed and fused." It started from becoming Nagato's father, starting from analyzing wood escape, starting from Naruto.
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Official(96)Scraped 20d ago
The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel
I really don't recommend it to people who have watched Naruto. Let's not talk about the minor issues. Let's talk about a few chapter setting issues that I have seen so far. The timing of Nagato's Rinnegan was wrong, White Zetsu became Kaguya's son, and Black Zetsu was able to use the power of the Heretic Golem.
No
Why don't the author come out and unlock it? Nagato's Rinnegan belongs to Uchiha Madara. When you say awakening, is it because the author is a cloud or because the protagonist didn't take a good look at it?
It's really poisonous. Please understand the settings before writing.
I was persuaded to quit by Hei Zetsu. Please watch the anime or read the novels written by others. WOC Hei Zetsu has no fighting ability. As a result, he and the protagonist fought back and forth, and they were still serious about each other. It was too poisonous.
I like your pirate, I don't like your hokage
Your Pirates book is the first book I have fully ordered, but Naruto, your writing is a mess. Now I want to slap you to death.
The author should go back and watch Naruto again
When I saw Nagato awakening his samsara eye, he immediately persuaded him to quit. What the hell was he writing?
What are you writing about?
I just wrote randomly, all kinds of clouds ☁, as long as I really have the skills. Those who give five stars have never watched Naruto. . .
Is it impossible to write without the original plot?
In the beginning of the rain ninja village, Nagato's father, this should be written by a normal person, a proper script opposite Konoha. As a result, he ran to Konoha again in order to forcefully return to the plot. Do you read fanfics to see the original plot? Wouldn't it be better if I went back and read the original work? Is it tiring to create your own plot? What do you write next? Is the protagonist and Tomomura Danzhao acting like idiots together? Then Nagato thought that he had no father or mother and continued to create the Akatsuki organization. The protagonist rushed over and ended up in Konoha? Princes and generals have a certain kind of relationship. Can't you be the boss yourself? Look at the two popular Naruto fan fiction books, Tsangseigan and Uzumaki no Kuni, the one who doesn't have himself as the boss.
Speechless... What has your apprentice done for you? There is no love without reason, right? Instead you
Speechless... What has your apprentice done for you? There is no love without reason, right? On the contrary, you have been sacrificing... For the sake of an apprentice who is less than a few months old, and the protagonist has lost his brain. It feels like the plot is being pushed forward, so embarrassing and tasteless
Did the author forget about the protagonist's wife and children?
It's been over 100 chapters, and I won't mention this matter anymore. It started with a meaning, and then I became a bird shadow and accepted a disciple, and told Madara that I won't interfere with your plan... In Madara's plan, your son is a tool for his resurrection... Later, he cooperated with Orochimaru and ran to Konoha... I skipped the story after the protagonist was resurrected and only read some main points. There may be some parts that I didn't see. The last time the protagonist's wife appeared was with Jiraiya (but the protagonist didn't know, nor was she worried), and she probably didn't appear again after that. Anyway, the protagonist's image as a heartless man was established.
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Official(96)Scraped 20d ago
The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel
I really don't recommend it to people who have watched Naruto. Let's not talk about the minor issues. Let's talk about a few chapter setting issues that I have seen so far. The timing of Nagato's Rinnegan was wrong, White Zetsu became Kaguya's son, and Black Zetsu was able to use the power of the Heretic Golem.
No
Why don't the author come out and unlock it? Nagato's Rinnegan belongs to Uchiha Madara. When you say awakening, is it because the author is a cloud or because the protagonist didn't take a good look at it?
It's really poisonous. Please understand the settings before writing.
I was persuaded to quit by Hei Zetsu. Please watch the anime or read the novels written by others. WOC Hei Zetsu has no fighting ability. As a result, he and the protagonist fought back and forth, and they were still serious about each other. It was too poisonous.
I like your pirate, I don't like your hokage
Your Pirates book is the first book I have fully ordered, but Naruto, your writing is a mess. Now I want to slap you to death.
The author should go back and watch Naruto again
When I saw Nagato awakening his samsara eye, he immediately persuaded him to quit. What the hell was he writing?
What are you writing about?
I just wrote randomly, all kinds of clouds ☁, as long as I really have the skills. Those who give five stars have never watched Naruto. . .
Is it impossible to write without the original plot?
In the beginning of the rain ninja village, Nagato's father, this should be written by a normal person, a proper script opposite Konoha. As a result, he ran to Konoha again in order to forcefully return to the plot. Do you read fanfics to see the original plot? Wouldn't it be better if I went back and read the original work? Is it tiring to create your own plot? What do you write next? Is the protagonist and Tomomura Danzhao acting like idiots together? Then Nagato thought that he had no father or mother and continued to create the Akatsuki organization. The protagonist rushed over and ended up in Konoha? Princes and generals have a certain kind of relationship. Can't you be the boss yourself? Look at the two popular Naruto fan fiction books, Tsangseigan and Uzumaki no Kuni, the one who doesn't have himself as the boss.
Speechless... What has your apprentice done for you? There is no love without reason, right? Instead you
Speechless... What has your apprentice done for you? There is no love without reason, right? On the contrary, you have been sacrificing... For the sake of an apprentice who is less than a few months old, and the protagonist has lost his brain. It feels like the plot is being pushed forward, so embarrassing and tasteless
Did the author forget about the protagonist's wife and children?
It's been over 100 chapters, and I won't mention this matter anymore. It started with a meaning, and then I became a bird shadow and accepted a disciple, and told Madara that I won't interfere with your plan... In Madara's plan, your son is a tool for his resurrection... Later, he cooperated with Orochimaru and ran to Konoha... I skipped the story after the protagonist was resurrected and only read some main points. There may be some parts that I didn't see. The last time the protagonist's wife appeared was with Jiraiya (but the protagonist didn't know, nor was she worried), and she probably didn't appear again after that. Anyway, the protagonist's image as a heartless man was established.
When did you read the novel?
When did you read the novel?
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