Time Travel: My Voice Was Eavesdropped by the Heroines!
About This Novel
In order to resurrect his parents, Di Fan was given a system to travel through all the worlds... But he never expected that every time he entered a new world, his voice would be heard by the heroine... So... World of the Divine Condor: Empress Xiao Longnu established Dayuan, becoming the first founding empress in the martial arts world! Fairy Sword World: Shushan was bulldozed, and the person who re-established the human martial arts holy land was the first Holy Master: Lin Yueru! Marvel World: In this life, I, Hela, will conquer the universe and let the light of Asgard ring through the galaxy! Journey to the West: Conquering Demons and Subduing Demons: What Western Scriptures are you taking? I, Miss Duan, will break the sky with my fists, bury the immortals, bury Buddhas, and bury all the demons in the world! White Snake World, Liaozhai World, Fengshen Universe... After countless worlds, when Di Fan finally met his parents... Wait, how come all the heroines who have turned on the heroine attribute in the worlds I traveled through followed? !
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Official(18)Scraped 20d ago
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I wrote more than a hundred chapters in one world, which is actually a bit too long. It turns out that there is only one heroine, the little dragon girl. The eunuch was expected, but I didn't expect that the world would end before it even passed.
There are too few emotional scenes between the heroine and the protagonist. It can be said that there is no emotional drama. It relies entirely on the heroine's mind reading. Other places are pretty good.
Not bad. . . .
It's okay. The plot is a bit slow. And the progress of your plot is a little slow. You can try to condense it. You have to stand in our perspective and read your novel. You will find that the progress of your novel is a little slow. You are not a novice novel writer. Try to condense it.
It's a bit short, isn't it about the many heroines? It doesn't feel as good as old books
It's quite fun to watch, but the back part is gone.
. . . . .
Didn't you say there is also Fairy Sword and Journey to the West? The one behind
Got system for resurrecting parents
In order to get the system by resurrecting his parents, the protagonist is tortured 👍
Is this the son of the protagonist of the previous book?[Emot=default,54/]
Change it, change it
It's not too late to change now, you. It's really boring for the protagonist to have his heart heard.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(18)Scraped 20d ago
Support continues, will there be updates later?
comment
I wrote more than a hundred chapters in one world, which is actually a bit too long. It turns out that there is only one heroine, the little dragon girl. The eunuch was expected, but I didn't expect that the world would end before it even passed.
There are too few emotional scenes between the heroine and the protagonist. It can be said that there is no emotional drama. It relies entirely on the heroine's mind reading. Other places are pretty good.
Not bad. . . .
It's okay. The plot is a bit slow. And the progress of your plot is a little slow. You can try to condense it. You have to stand in our perspective and read your novel. You will find that the progress of your novel is a little slow. You are not a novice novel writer. Try to condense it.
It's a bit short, isn't it about the many heroines? It doesn't feel as good as old books
It's quite fun to watch, but the back part is gone.
. . . . .
Didn't you say there is also Fairy Sword and Journey to the West? The one behind
Got system for resurrecting parents
In order to get the system by resurrecting his parents, the protagonist is tortured 👍
Is this the son of the protagonist of the previous book?[Emot=default,54/]
Change it, change it
It's not too late to change now, you. It's really boring for the protagonist to have his heart heard.
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