I Am Cultivating Immortality in a Strange World

The protagonist is a boss who escapes from a catastrophe. The author has always wanted to portray the feeling that the protagonist is a boss, but he did not handle it well. It gives people a very separated feeling. It gives me more of a feeling that the protagonist is an ordinary person who knows a lot. His character is not like a boss at all (or sometimes he is, sometimes not). I suggest the author polish it more; and there are many examples in the article. I often say that there are many ways to deal with problems if I am stronger. Writing like this does not reflect the power of the protagonist, but gives me a feeling of powerlessness. There are also some inconsistencies in the article. I guess I stopped writing and forgot. I suggest the author to check more before sending it out. The details are actually very important. Generally speaking, there are no big mistakes.

The protagonist's ability to be a god (Yangshen Zhenren) is not shown at all. It is as if he is an ordinary person carrying a lot of knowledge and magic weapons and traveling through the past. I remember there was one picture where the protagonist said he was a god

This book just doesn't feel immersive. After washing and washing, it was just killing and killing, and then practicing did not see any obvious improvement in strength and the growth of the protagonist's power. Wealth, power, cultivation, isn't that what women look for?

One thing to say, according to the title of the book, it is indeed a very good subject matter, but it is a pity that the author's character design is not good. Cultivating immortals in a strange world obviously wants the character of a big boss like the rational mastermind behind the scenes. I only read the first few chapters. The author wrote that the main character is a disciple that the sect focuses on training. He only knows how to fight and has average martial arts skills. When I saw this, I couldn't stand it. As for the plot, I only read the first few chapters, so I can't comment. Then I looked at the chapter names, and I personally felt it was average.

The protagonist doesn't feel like a sun god or an old monster.

Compared with your other works, this one is really average. The subject matter and the three-dimensional design of the protagonist are both good. I just kept eating the book countless times! Moreover, the content is too watery, with all kinds of nonsense thrown over and over again, and it's so annoying! The plot is too fragmented, and the main character doesn't have three minutes of interest in anything he does.

This is the first time I've seen a rating of 4 points. Awesome

A very good book, very interesting, and the setting is very novel. Finally, recite the poem, this is to become a respected person.

If you eat books seriously, won't the author check it?

The timeline is confusing. You don't need to watch it after you fake your death and escape.