Start with the Art of Trance

There have been a lot of people trolling recently, so let me tell you something. I'm a new author, I don't have enough writing skills, I don't have enough control over the plot, I just don't have enough. If the writing is not good, any comments are welcome. The author will absorb them if they can. But, your opinion is to point out that my writing is not good, rather than to stab me in the heart with a flying dragon, or to attack me personally. This author can't stand it. I hope you all can show your respect. If you don't like it, just delete it. Don't attack me personally. Let's just forget about each other. To those book friends who have been poisoned by my writing, I would like to say "I'm sorry" Please, all the big guys, please show your respect and let me go! ! ! ! !

Do you guys have any good names for practicing sects? You can post them. They should be distinctive. For example, if there is a sect of sword cultivators, what kind of skills they practice, the sect is divided into the inner sword lineage or the outer sword lineage. Another example is a family that specializes in cultivating immortals. Or there are sects specializing in alchemy, etc. If you have any good ideas, you can post them in this building!

It feels like the author has no outline, writes whatever comes to his mind at the moment, and ends up traveling all over the world inexplicably? ? Anyway, tell your senior brother and the little fox, it feels like I went down the mountain to make some soy sauce and then somehow never came back. The Peach Blossom Earth Immortal was probably added temporarily. When I was passing by and wrote a poem, an Earth Immortal popped up and then disappeared. The dragon walked out of the water and the Fu Lu monk fought. There is nothing you can do about the dragon, but after the flood and the After the monks are finished fighting, you can just save ordinary people. It's not that I want you to be a saint, it's just a casual thing. The main reason is that the character doesn't fit in. Normally, the protagonist is not the kind of character who is too ruthless and only cares about the road. He is a cultivator on the road, and his character is broken! ! ! Of course, I only saw it before it was put on the shelves, and this is my personal opinion, for reference only. If the author has other ideas, just pretend that I didn't say it.

Comment, maybe it is my first time to write a book, and the writing is not ideal. The idea is very good, but it is naive, and there are 72 skills. It cannot be as simple as you said. There are moves that are at least basic, such as sword energy and thunder sound, sword energy differentiation, sword training into silk, etc. There are also sword intentions, which are said to be 72 skills, divided into thousands of spells. Come on, I hope you have finished writing 100 of them and see for yourself. There are many unreasonable ones.

Why is it free? This is so strange. Is it because the performance is not good?

This book gave me the impression that it was bland and uneventful. The protagonist was a bit of a virgin, so I really couldn't stand it. . . . Farewell

I want to say that as a Taoist priest, if you don't study the Taoist scriptures or read the Taoist canon, you just directly create the Dharma and create the Tao, this is no different from an illiterate person studying the atomic bomb.

It's good now. I will continue to chase. I hope I won't give up halfway.

The pictures of these two are actually reversed, good guys

I was impressed by the fact that all the protagonists met outside were girls.