The Arrow God Who Devours the Starry Sky

The author wrote a 17-year-old protagonist as a mentally retarded person with an IQ of two or three years old. I really don't know what the author was thinking? Since we are writing fan fiction, details, chances, and opportunities can be changed, but the main body cannot be changed; I personally think that as a fantasy novel, the core of the entire story of Swallowing the Stars involves two key points: humanity and guardianship; In the Earth Chapter, the two major martial arts schools and the five powerful HR alliances are almost losing their minds in private fights. In the wilderness area, there are many people who kill each other and snatch prey from each other. At the same time, there are Fire Hammer Team and Beicheng Team who save other teams, Li Dewei who protects the military area, Jia Yi who cares about China, Hong and Lei Shen who are always ready to face alien visitors, and the great unity of mankind when facing the golden horned monster. The six heroes died generously; In the universe, there is a cruel slave trade within human beings, as well as the original ancestors who protect the human race, the Lord of Chaos City, the founder of Giant Axe, etc. After discovering that the earth is special, these people ignore the feelings of Luo Feng and other earthlings, and want to take the earth as their own. On the surface, it is for human beings, but in fact it is the distribution of resources for the descendants of these strong men. The success of Swallowed Starry Sky is due to the perseverance of the protagonist Luo Feng, and he will also make appropriate concessions when he is powerless. A protagonist with a good character is the success of a book. Characters such as perseverance, courage, passion, calmness, hatred of evil, and even cold-bloodedness and bloodthirsty can well create a protagonist. However, the author chose a silly and sweet character and shaped the protagonist into a three or four-year-old child who is not stained by the world of mortals. This kind of character Not only will the character not get sympathy in this type of novel, but it will bore readers. Readers have already expected the ending of the fanfic. Imagine having a protagonist with such a silly and sweet character save the earth and become a strong man in the universe. Do you think there will be any readers who want to read on?

It's really uncomfortable, it's just a matter of letting go of this. I'm 17 years old, a spiritual master, a high-level warrior, with the power of a mid-level warrior at most. I haven't done anything about practicing Five Hearts to the Heaven. The key point is that my mind is not yet mature. I have to listen to others to do this and that. From your perspective, it may be a reflection of mental maturity. Is it okay if you just put it here and tell others it's curry to get rid of the taste? In such a cruel environment, you did this. I really regret that I came in so cheaply and returned to the god of arrows? 🪝8 Is a gay god, right? Nausea

This kind of silly and sweet character is not suitable for me. . . . .

A seventeen-year-old has the mind of a young child. He actually doesn't know the level of a warrior in the context of the era he lives in. He listens to others in everything. He is a proper giant baby.

A normal person, at the age of 18, has no understanding of his environment at all, and still scores 700 points in the exam. Shouldn't he take the history exam? No logic at all

A mentally retarded man and a woman. There is a problem with the author's sexual orientation designation. He writes like a mentally retarded man. Also, the one who is over 1.7 Meters tall is pretty good. I'm curious. If you haven't tried it before, you can give it a try.

Either it's not well written, or there's something wrong with the protagonist's character. I don't know whether it's the author's psychological problem or the "unique" taste, but the character of the protagonist is really unlikable. The protagonist starts training (18 ~ Genius Battle) and has character problems. Before the genius battle, it can be said that he was young and acceptable. The battle between geniuses and torture... I can only say that there is something wrong with the author (just use your strength, there is nothing to hide your strength. Mental torture is personally unacceptable). When it comes to the company, Tang Shenwang has a saying that "pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger will easily turn you into a pig" (hiding your strength is acceptable). And then to the outside world, to the battlefield outside the territory (the art of human body flowering), it can only show that the author's psychological problem is a bit serious (not attacking the author himself, I just feel very uncomfortable mentally after reading this). Let's talk about the protagonist's character again, it's time to grow up. Luo Feng is a brother-in-law and can be tolerant; Hong and Lei Shen can be treated as elders, but they cannot be neither old nor young, appearing childish and unable to grow up. After the Genius War, the company is no longer young, but it's still like this (I've read so many fanfics, this is the first time I've read something like this). Is tomboy culture popular now? Incomprehensible and unmanly.

Come on, I haven't read it yet, but I saw a bunch of bad reviews. Even if it's a stone, I still want to taste it.

There are all negative reviews and only one out of seven positive reviews. I don't know if Tuo has any special hobbies. Others say it's a female channel and I don't dare to watch it at all.

An almost adult person writes like a retarded person. Speechless