Is This Cartoonist Mentally Ill?
About This Novel
Starting from the submission of the comic "Edge Walker" which was "adapted from anime", Lin Qingshan embarked on the road of different world comics (wen), painting (chao) and family (public). And then-- "No! It's a cybermaniac! Call the Terrorist Mobile Team!" "Run! He is a comic book villain!" "Awesome! I'm starting to understand everything!" "No, who asked him to draw comics?" "Use Flame Fist on him quickly!" "Is he mentally ill? Are you planning the plot like this?" "The mental state is good! We are discharged from the hospital!" "You come in too!" "Hahaha! I'm done, Master Dao!" ... "Edge Walker", "Chainsaw Man", "Fire Fist", "Attack on Titan", "The Strange One"... Lin Qingshan is out of control on the way to madness. At the same time, comic fans all agree that Lin Qingshan is a mental patient!
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Official(21)Scraped 12d ago
A novella comic has 89 chapters and 1/3 is too slow.
The copying pace is too slow for me
It looks good, but the selection of the copied works is wrong. However, you want to write about mental illness but there is no preparation at all in the early stage. It seems that you suddenly went crazy. Also, making games is a bit of a serious business. You can find a qualified game company through the system.
It feels like the first time I've written a novel. The childish writing style and the conversational system are not toxic at all. I personally don't like it. The protagonist is miserable at the beginning, and there are a lot of things written with unclear meaning. I have the urge to jump and read.
It's good to watch, but the plot could be reduced. Just write the exciting parts of the original work. The plot of the original work is a bit delayed.
The connection between the writing and the plot is actually quite good. Although many of the original chapters are basically pure comic plots, they are clearly written and written smoothly. At least I feel willing to continue reading. The parasitic beast part is really a failure. The original work is not explosive enough, and the feedback from readers is average. The author becomes less and less confident as he writes, but he still bites the bullet and feels that he must finish the plot. Including the chapters after the parasitic beast, it starts to feel like we have to finish the work quickly. In fact, if this part of Daogui can be really spread out, I think the response will be good, which is a bit of a pity...
The copying pace is too slow. When you write this, don't you know what the readers want to see? Others can only write 30 chapters in a book, but you can write 90 chapters, which is outrageous.
Let's see if you want to write about Lelouch, it's also good to write about Lelouch😷
**I bought more than 400 chapters and kept them for almost a year, but I didn't remember to read them for free with membership.
Suddenly four years later, is it going to end? ? ? ? ?
The writing is beautiful, come on, come on, come on
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Official(21)Scraped 12d ago
A novella comic has 89 chapters and 1/3 is too slow.
The copying pace is too slow for me
It looks good, but the selection of the copied works is wrong. However, you want to write about mental illness but there is no preparation at all in the early stage. It seems that you suddenly went crazy. Also, making games is a bit of a serious business. You can find a qualified game company through the system.
It feels like the first time I've written a novel. The childish writing style and the conversational system are not toxic at all. I personally don't like it. The protagonist is miserable at the beginning, and there are a lot of things written with unclear meaning. I have the urge to jump and read.
It's good to watch, but the plot could be reduced. Just write the exciting parts of the original work. The plot of the original work is a bit delayed.
The connection between the writing and the plot is actually quite good. Although many of the original chapters are basically pure comic plots, they are clearly written and written smoothly. At least I feel willing to continue reading. The parasitic beast part is really a failure. The original work is not explosive enough, and the feedback from readers is average. The author becomes less and less confident as he writes, but he still bites the bullet and feels that he must finish the plot. Including the chapters after the parasitic beast, it starts to feel like we have to finish the work quickly. In fact, if this part of Daogui can be really spread out, I think the response will be good, which is a bit of a pity...
The copying pace is too slow. When you write this, don't you know what the readers want to see? Others can only write 30 chapters in a book, but you can write 90 chapters, which is outrageous.
Let's see if you want to write about Lelouch, it's also good to write about Lelouch😷
**I bought more than 400 chapters and kept them for almost a year, but I didn't remember to read them for free with membership.
Suddenly four years later, is it going to end? ? ? ? ?
The writing is beautiful, come on, come on, come on
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It looks good in the early stage
[General Recommendation] The protagonist traveled through time and started drawing comics. The first thing he drew was Cyberpunk 2077. You can read it if you haven't read it. The author's description of the comics is quite good, but the other plot arrangements are a bit stiff.
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