
Unparalleled Martial Arts
by Kaki Bean Chen Tang Machine
About This Novel
Coming to the world of martial arts thousands of years ago, he was like an ant, practicing hard in order to survive. One day in the cave, a thousand years have passed in the world. Ten thousand years later, he emerges from the cave and is invincible. In this world, martial arts seems to have turned a corner...
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Official(10)Scraped 12d ago
The sentences are a bit unclear, incoherent, and the expression is not clear! It looks a bit laborious!
Kakidochen machine
Who is that machine?
What are you writing? There are a lot of typos.
That's right, I'm not in a hurry anyway. Since he had good intentions, Han Kunyun immediately agreed: "I don't want to go back, Brother Chacha, do you think this is a good idea." "
What a mess! There are dozens of typos in almost every chapter and the sentences are not fluent! 🤗
. . . . . Mixed mood
A rare way of writing. . . But the plot felt a bit confusing. . .
It was okay at the beginning, but then the text was off topic and the sentences were not fluent, but the plot still ran.
. . . . . . .
Too watery.
You're too watery, you can't do it at all
The dog forgot to eat shit
Chapter 1 of the original article: Dharma signs are as numerous as dogs, and immortality is everywhere. If you want to control your luck, you can only reach the realm of immortality. Because the golden body of martial arts has a strong life-saving ability, as long as it is not annihilated in an instant, it is easy to be reborn with a drop of blood. After just a few hundred words: One of the four evils in the world is greed. The Dharma can only fight against it, but the power of immortality suppresses or even destroys it. For thousands of years, immortality has become a legend. Who can defeat such evil creatures? In this world, I am afraid that disasters will be everywhere and all lives will be devastated. You don't even have to read the first chapter to know whether you can read it or not.
I have never read a novel since I learned to read book reviews
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Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 12d ago
The sentences are a bit unclear, incoherent, and the expression is not clear! It looks a bit laborious!
Kakidochen machine
Who is that machine?
What are you writing? There are a lot of typos.
That's right, I'm not in a hurry anyway. Since he had good intentions, Han Kunyun immediately agreed: "I don't want to go back, Brother Chacha, do you think this is a good idea." "
What a mess! There are dozens of typos in almost every chapter and the sentences are not fluent! 🤗
. . . . . Mixed mood
A rare way of writing. . . But the plot felt a bit confusing. . .
It was okay at the beginning, but then the text was off topic and the sentences were not fluent, but the plot still ran.
. . . . . . .
Too watery.
You're too watery, you can't do it at all
The dog forgot to eat shit
Chapter 1 of the original article: Dharma signs are as numerous as dogs, and immortality is everywhere. If you want to control your luck, you can only reach the realm of immortality. Because the golden body of martial arts has a strong life-saving ability, as long as it is not annihilated in an instant, it is easy to be reborn with a drop of blood. After just a few hundred words: One of the four evils in the world is greed. The Dharma can only fight against it, but the power of immortality suppresses or even destroys it. For thousands of years, immortality has become a legend. Who can defeat such evil creatures? In this world, I am afraid that disasters will be everywhere and all lives will be devastated. You don't even have to read the first chapter to know whether you can read it or not.
I have never read a novel since I learned to read book reviews









