Under One Man: Man of Steel

First of all, the protagonist is brainless. He gets a superpower that makes him stronger in the sun. He doesn't think about Superman until he gets a biological force field. It doesn't mean that he is definitely Superman from the beginning, but the protagonist doesn't even think about Superman. Isn't it too stupid? There is also the most classic one that feels that personal strength is useless. The reason given by the protagonist when a superman wants to establish an organization is that he doesn't know if he can keep getting stronger, and he is afraid that his superpower will be gone. The organization you created with your power, why does it think that it will listen to you if you have no power? There is also the superpower of the protagonist, which is also outrageous. A superman is burned by fire. To be honest, you don't need to think of him as superman. You can just think of the superpower as a new superman tailor-made by the author for the protagonist. Judging from other comments, the author should not have a fighting ability, but your writing is no different than a fighting ability. You either don't use the gimmick of Superman. If you do, just write Superman properly, okay? The character of the protagonist makes people feel uncomfortable. Do you use your own strength? Used it, but is it good? Accurate. This was the first time I saw a book that made me feel uncomfortable after the protagonist killed someone. I don't know why.

The author doesn't know how to write, please practice more.

It's okay. The logic is relatively clear, and it's not too overwhelming. I just feel that I will be tired after being invincible. If an enemy comes from the sky, I will feel like I am forcing myself to write it down.

Many people don't know if they have watched the animation, but most of the battles in the animation are duels with few descriptions of damage to the surroundings. Maybe many people have misunderstandings about the combat power of the aliens. According to the analogy of the most classic battle between the King of Battle and the Zhuge family, the Zhuge family are equivalent to elite aliens. Their basic attack (small fireball) penetrates the ground and blasts a hole. It is basically as powerful as a rocket. The ultimate move, such as the White Tiger, directly exploded a pit with a diameter of seven or eight meters and a depth of two or three meters. This power was basically equivalent to that of a large missile. As for defense, these people took Wang Ye's move and blocked the hammer, and then moved and blocked and hammered directly through a stone lion. This means that at least most of the defense power of this group of people is ineffective against them, and individual combat weapons are ineffective against them. And if you compare it to the Laotianshi, it feels like you can basically ignore all hot weapons.

I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.

I want to see the protagonist swallowing the stars and going to other worlds

The people of the motherland themselves can simply say that they don't eat beef anymore.

I turned off the light and let it stay on until this point. I made peace with myself and the result didn't matter anymore.

Maybe it's my fault that I can't understand it, but I still have to give you five stars.

Write logically and slowly, don't rush.