One Person: What Does it Have to Do with My Boss to Have a Demon with All Genders?

With so much foreshadowing, I thought you had some new solution, but the result is that your younger brother dies. It's over. There is a motive for joining Quanxing, which is a bit redundant from time to time...

Your brother has already been undercover in Longhu Mountain. In the end, he led people to kill Longhu Mountain and spy on the secrets that others had hidden for decades. He almost killed Master Tian. How many people died when he attacked Longhu Mountain. Is it abnormal for Master Tian to kill your brother? Shouldn't Gong Qing die?

What kind of stupid novel has too many flaws, especially the protagonist, who is stupid and trustworthy, and you became the leader of Quanxing so easily? You think that a force that has existed for such a long time is just playing house, and you just play it as you say, and your motivation for becoming the leader is ridiculously stupid.

I don't understand what the protagonist is thinking. He cares about his younger brother but he still doesn't save him. He doesn't save him even though he can obviously be saved. I really don't understand.

Well done. The original version of this thing is that the fists have the final say. No one is decent, including the top one. They are not a good thing.

The writing is still good, and it is considered above average among others. Keep up the good work.

If you really want to save your brother, knock him unconscious and take him away immediately *** did nothing. In the end, my brother died. Since I wrote it like this, I should finish the whole article.

The writing is not rigorous enough. You want to write a protagonist who is calm, calm and decisive, but also funny. These two cannot conflict.

It is different from the brainless cool articles on the market. Although in my opinion it is somewhat lacking in the logic of motivation, the flaws are not hidden and the intention is quite good. Please keep updating.

The protagonist is a time traveler, and he has a terrible relationship with his original brother. Now they say that they should put aside the plot of helping others and respect the fate of others. Everyone has to pay for what they have done. When you travel back in time, you need to pursue something, either to study how to live forever, or to pursue a life of happiness. What is your purpose of diving into the cesspool of Quanxing? I can't stand it even after reading Chapter 8.