Qiankun Diagram

I read something a bit similar to Xuanhuang Daozu, but why did I omit some of the cultivation and thinking process? It is a bit fragmented. In some places, I feel that there are still fewer words. It's like the beginning is only the first day, and the next chapter is the third day. It suddenly becomes Danjin. Isn't there only light and dark in the front? You should also write clearly. I feel like I missed it and some details are missing. I'm convinced.

It's not bad if you like the weird, but now it looks fine, and the ideas are pretty good. The only two bad points are that after reluctantly accepting it, it looks good. 1. The protagonist practices martial arts in a strange world, but then enters the immortal way. The reason why I continue to accept it is that the martial arts and immortal ways practiced by the protagonist are just equivalent to exercises. They are to control the weirdness, not to conquer the world with martial arts and immortal ways. I don't know if it will change in the future, but at least it is good now. 2. My stance is quite to my taste. I try my best to help mortals, but I am not a mortal nanny. At least the author didn't write a plot about a mortal nanny, but he was a bog when it came to the arrangement, that is, there was a problem with the choice of the president of the Suppression of Evil Department. He gave up suppressing the ghost cave and went to save the protagonist of the same level. He was a bit irrational. It was clearly analyzed that the protagonist was very strong and in the late second level, but if the ghost cave was used to appear third-level evil cultivators, the whole city would be completely ruined, so he went anyway. But now that I think about it, it still makes sense. The protagonist is the future. If he is surrounded and killed without the strength of the director, there will be no future. I was still a little depressed while reading the book. I had a lot of imagination and it was too big to avoid plug-ins. The four great treasures appeared. However, I made up for it later in the third level. The four great treasures are only at the second level of combat power, otherwise they would collapse.

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No, the logic doesn't even make sense, it's terrible. I barely finished the first chapter.

It's very well written. Come on, it'll be better.