In Charge

Every time she travels through time, she is the legitimate daughter and concubine, and the concubine is the miracle doctor. Finally, someone time travels to the maid! And she has a pretty good master, so this maid didn't get to the top by stepping on her master! There is no conflict between master and servant, so cute!

Overall rating: 3.5 Stars Have you finished reading: Yes Whether to review: No Author's brief comment: Use a certain profession as the starting point to unfold the story Design of the heroine: A soldier travels to a shipbuilding family, has justice and kindness in his heart, does not succumb to the feudal secular world, is good at carpentry and shipbuilding, is courageous and persevering, and has a big heart. The male protagonist's design: He has a blood feud, is extremely talented, is good at calculations, and can see through people's hearts. He looks as gentle as jade, but is calm and sober inside. Supporting Characters: Because of the ample space, many supporting characters have rich descriptions. Plot line: The heroine suffered betrayal, lost her memory and was injured, so she was forced to be a favor by the female partner and taken as a slave. Later, she got rid of the shackles with her own efforts and talents. After recovering her memory, she decisively chose to join forces with the hero to fight back the betrayer and start her own career. Emotional line: The male protagonist does not appear too early, but he is easy to recognize. The two are true soul mates who understand and appreciate each other. Completeness: The story is very long, and it ends with a small climax. The postscript adds explanations about the male and female protagonists' descendants dominating the world, and the endings of some supporting characters are not fully explained. Extra: None, it is said that there is one in the publishing version The writing style is very distinctive, with a mixture of clear text and some self-created words that may be a bit jerky to read. I don't like to use subjects and conjunctions. Brief comment: The author's early novels focused on plot, so the whole story was full of ups and downs. The heroine is a master of shipbuilding and is the maid of the heroine in the early stage, so the first third of the story contains a lot of house fighting. But as the plot unfolds, the heroine focuses more on managing her connections and shipbuilding business, and planning to regain her freedom. So it can be regarded as a relatively true story about strong women. The heroine's strength has attracted many admirers, but her achievements have almost nothing to do with the support and help of these people. Even with the male protagonist and the female protagonist, they are more of mutually beneficial partners rather than objects to be protected. Some friends may step on the emotional line. One is that there are not too many emotional lines. The male protagonist does not appear too early and is disconnected for a while. And most of the time, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is more like a mutual sympathy between confidants and a mutually beneficial partnership. The emotional line is not particularly strong, but the good match between the male and female protagonists can be seen between the lines. Another thing is that the article clearly emphasizes that the male protagonist has had countless relationships with women and claims to have had relationships with women, although they were all unnamed casual relationships. But from the moment he appeared, he had an abstinent character. Although I would attend banquets and go to fireworks places, my descriptions of them were all about being cold and leaving early. So in fact, I feel that the male protagonist has had many women before. This setting is not necessary to write out specifically, and it does not affect the logic of the writing at all. Maybe the male protagonists in ancient novels generally have this kind of setting where a thousand sails are over. In addition, starting from the time when the heroine went to Dabei to rescue her sister, the plot was a little off track from the previous one. In the early stage, the heroine is set up to be sad and unable to accept someone who wants to kill her, but in the later stage, the male protagonist designs to make the Nande royal family seek death, so that the entire opponent's family can be destroyed, and the heroine's reaction turns into his superb strategy. The contrast between front and back is a bit big. Overall, it is still a drama-oriented work worth watching.

Food and grass in the early stage, fairy grass in the later stage (completed, with a male protagonist) The writing of the first sixty chapters is quite boring. The house fighting is not exciting, but it all depends on the good writing. Ever since I met the male protagonist on the ship (the male protagonist guessed it himself), the readability has been greatly improved. The female protagonist is a time-travel, she came from a childhood, but she has lost her memory of what happened after the time-travel. As for the heroine, she is said to be kind yet cunning, calm and calm, but sometimes impulsive and passionate. She is quite a contradictory person. She is very real. In addition, the heroine was a shipbuilding engineer in the army in her previous life Since the heroine became the leader of Hongju, the rhythm of the whole book has been completely accelerated, and the power and intrigues have begun to be revealed, which is wonderful! Also, the relationship between wives and concubines in this book should not be taken too seriously. Although it does not conform to the real relationship between wives and concubines in ancient times (such as an equal wife and a side wife), this article is semi-empty, so don't take it too seriously.

The story of rebirth as a maid~