Kobold Legend

Hiding in front of a bunch of retarded kobolds? Wouldn't it be better to have the ability to directly control these kobolds to help fight monsters? When killing monsters with my younger brother, I have to emphasize that I am a support and I am afraid that others will discover my abilities. The protagonist's IQ is really like that of a kobold.

1. This book feels like it could be written, but racial conflicts are a control point. The author also writes about the contradictions of various races. It would be interesting to write about the feeling of racial discrimination, but it is a pity that it is impossible to write like that. 2. It's too detailed and the pace is not fast enough. I prefer a slow pace. What I mean here is that the plot is too detailed and there is no theatrical plot. The plot in this book is a big main line, and the branch lines on the road are too small, so it is easy to see the end at a glance. 3. There is a lack of real failures and setbacks. I really want to tell the author that since you wrote it in such detail, I understand that you want to write a wonderful novel. You don't want your novel to be the same as those of Long Aotian, so add some setbacks to the protagonist's race, such as the destruction of his home and forced migration. These are all twists that can distort the main line and produce small plot twists. 4. The shaping of the protagonist can be said to be more realistic and detailed. Why is it just a comparison? The shaping of the protagonist is still too idealistic and naive. For dark points, you can refer to the Book of the Dead, and for turning points, you can refer to Qin Li. 5. It is recommended that the author learn the writing style of Qin Li. Since he likes to write carefully and carefully, he should work hard to cultivate his ideals. 6. Finally, I wish the author will realize his dream soon and write a book that he is satisfied with.

The reviews from most book friends are pretty good. The author can persevere. It would be a pity to give up.

Kobolds are relatively strong and adaptable. The intelligence is not that low either. My ancestors were also rich, and they were once the creations of Titans: Earth Spirits

Except for a few minor flaws, everything else is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The writing is too detailed and contains a lot of nonsense. I suggest you revise it.

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Wrote a protagonist from a different perspective

I remember the title of your book is very interesting. Come on.

Tauren will Someone is watching If you want that kind of tragic green, you need to be so cruel to the protagonist.