Travel Through Konoha and Open Treasure Chests

Is the author taking it for granted? You, a protagonist who has read the original work, don't even understand the twists and turns of Konoha. How dare you take two Uzumaki clan members to Konoha? Even if you have to say that you have great strength, how can you have the confidence to protect the two of them against the five scumbags? Also, you have a system treasure chest, but there are only three around Konoha? I'm drunk too. You didn't even specify the levels of the system's treasure chests, so you just got a Teigu from just a bronze treasure chest? A book about useless 13

First of all, I would like to state that as a loyal Naruto fan, I have read more than a hundred books about Naruto, all kinds of secret stories, and many fan novels. As a result, I will be very harsh on some works that I am very optimistic about, but I do not mean to criticize the author at all. If there are any mistakes in my words, I also ask the author to forgive me. First of all, I only know about Naruto, I have no experience with Pirates and other anime, but what I want to say is that Naruto is really Dabai Lai, and you can see him if you want? Naruto is very busy, not to mention that the protagonist also has the Uzumaki tribe with him! Ever since Uzumaki and Konoha broke out, they are almost mortal enemies! Uzumaki fought desperately in front, but Konoha ignored it in order to protect itself. Leading to the annihilation of the whirlpool. So, just imagine, a Uzumaki child comes at this time. Who knows if she is a genius? What if she goes crazy and casts the Ghoul Seal and dies with her? Not to mention that the Hokage has bugs such as the Tongue-Bane Seal and the Caged Bird, but he should at least use the secret technique of the Yamazaka clan to explore it, right? Furthermore, every Uzumaki clan member is very rare! Danzo, who is good at collecting geniuses from all races, doesn't want to interfere!

Why is it that the protagonist is 50-50 against everyone? You have too many battle scenes and it makes people uncomfortable to watch. You obviously have a system and work hard, but in the end it is difficult to cut down just a trash fish. Don't talk about the protagonist, he will become stronger in the later stage. The later stage of Naruto is the same as cheating. As long as you don't cheat, you may still be 50-50. Well.........

The protagonist's abilities are too complicated, including fire, wind and ice. Doesn't the author know that there are too many but not enough? Just like Kakashi is known as a cloned ninja. When fighting against others, he only uses thunder shield and blood eye, plus a three-body technique for assistance. The other ones are of no use at all. It is better to directly give the protagonist a blood inheritance limit to be more practical, just like Uzumaki Naruto's small balls, big balls, colorful balls, and black balls. None of them can't be dealt with. If the big and small balls are used together, they will beat the enemy until they call him daddy. To use an analogy, We readers just want to see the thrill of seeing Senju Hashirama hit an enemy called daddy by calling him daddy. You give the protagonist so many skills and you have to bother to remember them. How can you still feel the thrill of reading a book? Okay, I won't say too much. The author thinks I'm being silly. Then tell me why you don't write it yourself? Right!

In fact, I feel that when my status is high, I forget my true feelings. Unless it's a pig's trotter, because pig's trotters will never forget their true intentions. Otherwise, if their status is high and their status is noble, they will definitely forget their true intentions.

I can't stand watching anymore. It's hard to write a novel. I understand. Shaving is very taxing on the body. It is unavoidable if the body is not strong enough. Also, the reason why two Teigu can't be used is because using the Teigu requires the approval of the Teigu. I understand. I remember it was said in the original drama. Doesn't the protagonist's killing change change at all? There are also the skills of the protagonist. Tell me about the shuriken skill. How did you learn it without shuriken? There are also sword skills. I feel that there are too many loopholes. Don't tell me I'll lose if I'm serious.

Why are you going to Konoha? 1. Have you seen the map? The Uzumaki clan lives near the Country of Fire. To get to the Grass Ninja Village, you need to cross the Country of Fire to get to the Country of Grass. 2. None of the people who ran away were destroyed because of Konoha. The Uzumaki supported Konoha in the first battle because of Tobirama. I believe that the Uzumaki destroyed the family. The Uzumaki clan has a bad temper and focuses on emotions. The Jinchuriki only needs one. The Uzumaki sent Kushina there before. Konoha turned around and refused to recognize anyone. It was Mito who failed. 3. Is the treasure chest system broken? Any Teigu is Teigu. What will you write in the future? 4. Gaara's father didn't want to see Gaara because Gaara had a difficult delivery when he gave birth to Gaara. 5. The reason for the blood mist is because Obito controls Gouju Yagura 6. The Raikage kidnapped other blood successors. Some of them were almost dead if they were kidnapped. He also used Akatsuki. Are you confused?

Suggestion: The author asks the protagonist to defect from Konoha in the middle of the year and go to the black market (I don't remember the black market, anyway, it's the one who offers bounties for killing people) to become a professional killer. As for the place to live, if the author really wants the protagonist to sign a contract with the local psychic beast, then live where the psychic beast lives. , And the main character should be colder (not the kind who talks less). No matter whether they are men or women (the same goes for beauties), young or old, children should be treated equally. Anyone who offends the main character will be killed. Also, write a single female lead (if the main character does not return to Earth, you can write a single female lead, but don't write a harem, which is disgusting. If you want to return to Earth, it is recommended to write a single female lead). Reason: This will help the protagonist grow and earn extra money to stay away from the darkness of Konoha. The reason for the place I just mentioned is that it is easy to avoid being discovered and it helps the protagonist to hide something. Why should the protagonist be colder? Because in such troubled times, any danger may occur, regardless of men, women, old or young, it may pose a threat to the protagonist.

Well, what can I say? When I saw your introduction, I suspected that you copied it. There was a book published earlier than yours. The title and genre of the book were also Naruto, but it was not The Eunuch. I haven't read your book, so I won't make any comments.

It doesn't matter if high-quality products like Qiuhe Tokyo Ghoul are blocked because I can find them.