Ninja at the Top of the Food Chain
About This Novel
The new book "The Old Devil of Konoha Wants to Be a Good Man", I hope you will support it, collect and vote~ The introduction is as follows: Naruto is realistic, traveling through the second shinobi war, Konoha Kage starts with intertwined beliefs, entanglements, interests, and the gears of fate begin to turn again. The village of Ninja is fighting, the destiny of the country is changing, the dawn of civilization is blooming, and the wings of butterflies will eventually set off a strong wind. Lei Luo woke up from his sleep, and what appeared in front of him was a world containing endless possibilities. -------------- PS: Q group 956805546
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Official(35)Scraped 20d ago
A little disgusting
This Yuko is the biggest failure. What is going on with this person? Is it the heroine? A ronin who has evil intentions from the beginning, has helped so many times and has to repay the favor. He seems to be inseparable from others. Is this the attitude a heroine should have? Has this author considered the views of the reading public? I want to write Naruto with an IQ, which is good. I want to learn from other people's reincarnation eyes of Naruto, but it is sloppy. The settings of a skill are unclear and the emotions of a character are unclear. Fail
Do you know why only a small number of people have read your book? It's because the things you write in the book itself are only relevant to a small number of people. What you write cannot interest most people.
When I read Chapter 185, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist was clearly written to be so decisive and decisive, but he had been working with Yuko for so long to force her to have more scenes. Even if she was set as the heroine, there was no foreshadowing at the beginning. The initial character design was just an ordinary neighbor chuunin, just a neighbor. Even if he had some feelings for her, he hid her out of Konoha for her safety. , But the protagonist's younger brother from this world continues to wander around in Konoha. During the protagonist's period, his strength is high and his personality is flamboyant. With the character shown by the protagonist, Kato Dan and others are ready to kill at any time. All the younger brothers in this world can be described in one stroke and are not afraid of other people's ideas of his younger brother. How come there are so many flashy scenes with her later? Could it be that she has traveled through time like the protagonist? He also has a split personality! The character design was such a failure, I always felt a bit like a virgin, and I was trying to force the drama when writing her. My opinion is not to criticize others. Everyone has different opinions. It is just my unreasonable personal opinion on the plot. I hope you can adopt it reasonably.
No explosive points
It's just bland, just fight casually, without describing how strong the opponent is. It's just that it's difficult to fight anyway, but I make it clear to myself. It's useless. I don't know how strong my opponent is. If I blow myself, no one will care. There are no scenes in the fights, each fight is barely adequate, and the writing can only describe the turn-based exchange of skills. I'm not telling you what ninjutsu the protagonist uses and how you learn poison and you still can't kill anyone. Why do you choose the most troublesome path? If you are chosen, you will show it. No matter how hard it is, you will grow and you will suddenly become awesome. Within five chapters, three chapters are in progress and one chapter is on the way. Why do you want to fight from genin to some high-level Kage within one year? It's so urgent? Even so, if you don't pretend to be pretentious, what kind of passionate novel can you call it? You play Kaguya all the way, and the characters are not described. What's the difference between counting sheep? If you only care about the outcome of a novel, then don't write down the anecdote and go straight to the ending.
The gold finger is a bit big when opened
Goldfinger, can you control time at will?
water......
There has been a lot of buzz since the first 3 chapters, and I don't know what will happen next
I guess this book should be a good book for people who really don't like Naruto and are selfish, but for me who likes various characters in Naruto, it's poison.
I won't give points. People in the chapter and page comments have zero reading time. Can the author tell me what's going on?
to be honest
The positioning of Yuko is too confusing. She seems to be the heroine, but there is no emotional extension in the article. Are you saying she's not the heroine? The protagonist is too close to her, and even the protagonist's most basic secrets are exposed, and his inner thoughts are constantly being peeped into. But the protagonist didn't take any measures. This was just a warning that it didn't look good.
Passionate anime novel
What needs to be noted in this type of novel is that the combat power is easy to collapse, and it becomes easier to collapse in the later stages. Whether it is a fairy tale, fantasy or passionate anime novel, the combat power coefficient can be changed, such as genin, chunin, jounin, shadow, super shadow. You can write a qualitative change but not collapse
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Official(35)Scraped 20d ago
A little disgusting
This Yuko is the biggest failure. What is going on with this person? Is it the heroine? A ronin who has evil intentions from the beginning, has helped so many times and has to repay the favor. He seems to be inseparable from others. Is this the attitude a heroine should have? Has this author considered the views of the reading public? I want to write Naruto with an IQ, which is good. I want to learn from other people's reincarnation eyes of Naruto, but it is sloppy. The settings of a skill are unclear and the emotions of a character are unclear. Fail
Do you know why only a small number of people have read your book? It's because the things you write in the book itself are only relevant to a small number of people. What you write cannot interest most people.
When I read Chapter 185, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist was clearly written to be so decisive and decisive, but he had been working with Yuko for so long to force her to have more scenes. Even if she was set as the heroine, there was no foreshadowing at the beginning. The initial character design was just an ordinary neighbor chuunin, just a neighbor. Even if he had some feelings for her, he hid her out of Konoha for her safety. , But the protagonist's younger brother from this world continues to wander around in Konoha. During the protagonist's period, his strength is high and his personality is flamboyant. With the character shown by the protagonist, Kato Dan and others are ready to kill at any time. All the younger brothers in this world can be described in one stroke and are not afraid of other people's ideas of his younger brother. How come there are so many flashy scenes with her later? Could it be that she has traveled through time like the protagonist? He also has a split personality! The character design was such a failure, I always felt a bit like a virgin, and I was trying to force the drama when writing her. My opinion is not to criticize others. Everyone has different opinions. It is just my unreasonable personal opinion on the plot. I hope you can adopt it reasonably.
No explosive points
It's just bland, just fight casually, without describing how strong the opponent is. It's just that it's difficult to fight anyway, but I make it clear to myself. It's useless. I don't know how strong my opponent is. If I blow myself, no one will care. There are no scenes in the fights, each fight is barely adequate, and the writing can only describe the turn-based exchange of skills. I'm not telling you what ninjutsu the protagonist uses and how you learn poison and you still can't kill anyone. Why do you choose the most troublesome path? If you are chosen, you will show it. No matter how hard it is, you will grow and you will suddenly become awesome. Within five chapters, three chapters are in progress and one chapter is on the way. Why do you want to fight from genin to some high-level Kage within one year? It's so urgent? Even so, if you don't pretend to be pretentious, what kind of passionate novel can you call it? You play Kaguya all the way, and the characters are not described. What's the difference between counting sheep? If you only care about the outcome of a novel, then don't write down the anecdote and go straight to the ending.
The gold finger is a bit big when opened
Goldfinger, can you control time at will?
water......
There has been a lot of buzz since the first 3 chapters, and I don't know what will happen next
I guess this book should be a good book for people who really don't like Naruto and are selfish, but for me who likes various characters in Naruto, it's poison.
I won't give points. People in the chapter and page comments have zero reading time. Can the author tell me what's going on?
to be honest
The positioning of Yuko is too confusing. She seems to be the heroine, but there is no emotional extension in the article. Are you saying she's not the heroine? The protagonist is too close to her, and even the protagonist's most basic secrets are exposed, and his inner thoughts are constantly being peeped into. But the protagonist didn't take any measures. This was just a warning that it didn't look good.
Passionate anime novel
What needs to be noted in this type of novel is that the combat power is easy to collapse, and it becomes easier to collapse in the later stages. Whether it is a fairy tale, fantasy or passionate anime novel, the combat power coefficient can be changed, such as genin, chunin, jounin, shadow, super shadow. You can write a qualitative change but not collapse
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Naruto fanfic, the protagonist is relatively sane, not dark, starts out close to Shadow's strength, and is the master of time. Ps: The recommended "Sun in Naruto" starting point has been removed from the shelves and went to Hedgehog Cat. It is one of the best pure Naruto fics, and it is on the journey of Naruto's red revolution.
Time ability in Naruto
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Naruto fanfic, the protagonist is rational, not bloodline theory,
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