Warn! Containment Breach!

It's a pity. The overall idea and setting are quite interesting, but the details are confusing. The plot can obviously go on very smoothly, but it pretends to be completely unnecessary when it's not necessary, disrupting the rhythm. The plot can obviously proceed like this: slay monsters to gain points → successfully practice spiritual guidance → change homes He happened to proceed with the plot like this: Gain points by killing monsters, and others would praise him without any preparation → Successfully practiced the spiritual guidance method, the doctor looked down on the protagonist for no reason and was shocked by the protagonist's training speed → He was promoted and moved to another house and was looked down upon by others for no reason, and those who looked down on him later were inexplicably frightened. The several pretense was unprepared and inexplicable, and I couldn't see any use other than disrupting the rhythm. Where the protagonist spawns monsters, if I first write about how others and the alien species are defeated, and may even be annihilated, and then the protagonist jumps out and successfully fights the monsters and is praised by others, I would think that he tried his best, but he didn't. Before the doctor looks down on the protagonist, let me say it first. Only people with certain qualifications can successfully learn the spiritual guidance method. Only those who have learned so-and-so can practice it easily. But why is the protagonist so impossible or difficult to succeed in practice? The protagonist chooses a dormitory and is looked down upon by the civil servants. In just one small plot, the inexplicable place immediately flies into the air. The above is just a lack of necessary foreshadowing, which leads to a chaotic rhythm. You need to lose your mind to watch it here, and all kinds of contradictions are in a mess. A civilian looks down on security guards, but is afraid of the security captain, which is inexplicable. The security guards here are very special and often kill people. Does everyone know that? As a result, you, a civilian, were frightened by the experience of security guards killing people. So where did you get the confidence to look down on people before? Especially what the captain said: They look down on us, so we scare them If this sentence fits the plot, where is the logic?

This book is full of shit. It's a rare masterpiece. The protagonist has an IQ, the supporting characters are deeply portrayed, and I love it so much.

Very nice. Overall very good. My advice to the author is not to write such a deliberately pretentious plot, but to write about the contained objects properly. What I'm talking about is the bizarre adventure of Thornhead. Authors have a family to support and readers to cater to. But as a reader, I think this kind of pretentious behavior for the protagonist is extremely deliberate and cannot attract readers. Instead, it reduces the appeal of the work. At least for a reader like me, this is the case. After reading the two chapters of Thorny's Bizarre Adventure, I stopped reading and read the book for a long time.

I'll give it four stars. The first few chapters were good, but I couldn't stand it when I saw the jailer. You can try other novels without knowing anything, but this kind of novel should be tried before you die. Compared with the mysterious Klein, it is too out of touch in this kind of world. I hope I can write better next time.

There is no toxic content for the time being, and the character creation is great. The power of white prostitutes🗡️

It's hard to say, can the punctuation marks be better? I almost lost the punctuation marks when I read the novel.

I haven't watched it yet, but I'm a big CP fan and I hope it satisfies me. First give me a five-star review Don't let the author down

After seeing the multiple restarts of the timeline, a lot of people can clearly remember it. The author has made it so logical that it loses its logic.

Since you love to play black monkey so much and leave readers aside, then you can play slowly and I will start the book-raising mode!

Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking, recommended