The Ancient Giant Bear That Lives in the World of Immortality

No wonder the protagonist traveled through time and turned into a bear. He is afraid of everything except dogs and bears. He is not like other protagonists who squirm in order to seize the time to develop. This is a real dog. He is more afraid of monsters than humans. There are three demon pills. The first two are stacked with concealment and danger perception. It is understandable and consistent with the feeling. You have to have behavioral logic, but you still need to hide three of them, and the accompanying magic vines don't pay attention to training, so the demon soldiers can still be seen. In the future, when the level is high, I'm afraid there will be a lack of output methods. No matter how fleshy or stealthy, it will be trapped by people and ranged attacks will grind it to death. I really don't like the character of the protagonist, so I gave up.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the meager praise begins to speak out, and the number of negative comments begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

What I wrote earlier is quite interesting. I don't like the later settings. I have never seen anyone who can live longer than a demon. I am laughing to death. The purpose of rape is to live longer.

Overall, the concept is relatively complete, and all the holes dug can be filled. However, I feel that the rhythm is not very good. It is relatively slow in the early stage, but it is still too urgent later. Especially starting from the battle in the Snowy Mountains and entering the death camp, the pace suddenly became much faster. Many plots and characters were quickly changed without much development of the map. This brings many problems. First of all, the density of information received by readers has increased sharply, requiring extra attention to digest; second, the characters have just been established and then switched away, and the image creation is not full enough; third, the settings are constantly thrown out, or the settings are upgraded or patched, and the world view is constantly reconstructed, which is very tiring for the readers; fourth, the constant reversal, reversal, and reversal, which is too frequent and too deliberate, will lead to aesthetic fatigue; finally, the author is too tired to throw out so many plot settings in one breath. It is recommended to slow down and control the pace. You can change it occasionally, but it doesn't need to be so fast and tight for a long time.

سىزنىڭ ئىسمىڭىز نېمە When will the new book be released? When will the new book be released? When will the new book be released?

The lazy bird is a typical example of someone who gets worse as he writes.

We are human beings after all, and we have different paths and do not work together. I gave up

Oops, I traveled through time and became an animal. I am still a bear cub. I am either being eaten or on the way to being eaten!

The lazy bird master has published a new book again. Why not update the ending page for old book fans? This is not interesting enough

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but there are some hidden dangers. I'm currently at chapter 270. If you have low defense or negative defense, you can leave. The two women (female protagonists) currently related to the protagonist are second-hand or third-hand or above. I know that the author likes wives, but "good for nothing" is a bit too much.