Start with Blue Silver Grass

To put it simply, my evaluation of this book is very imaginative. Goldfinger is very good. The author is an old bookworm. He probably wants to go up the river to plan and write out all the ideas in the books he has read over the years. The author may be a newbie, but the proportions are lacking. I always feel that the description is The writing is a bit inadequate, and the world is a bit too complicated. In fact, Mugenliu novels, especially Mugenliu novels that have their own fixed world, do not need too many worlds. It is enough to write as exciting a world as possible for each world. Have you noticed that most Mugenliu novels? As long as there are too many worlds, there are very few quick-travel ones that can be written as classics. Infinite Flow has two points of view. The first point of view is to make up for the previous shortcomings and find opportunities in each world. The second point of view is to write a new chapter of your own, which is different from the original work. In fact, Infinite Flow is a shortened version of the fan fiction. It just compresses the world and exchanges resources. Although not every world must be written until you are satisfied, try to write the test paper as completely as possible instead of drawing on resources, like making a copy.

Lin Yi's parents were childhood sweethearts and childhood sweethearts. The family members are quite simple and there are no special circumstances, except that the grandfather has the same martial arts spirit as the protagonist.

The setting and writing style of the author's article are actually very good, and the plot is not bad, but the framework is not good, the structure is scattered, there is no main body, what is the clone doing? Aren't they just tool people? It's not a major event, so there's no need to write too much about the doppelgänger. Of course, you can write about avatars if you really want to, and don't hit here and there. In my personal opinion, the author's writing power can no longer control the text after he writes chapter 70 or 80. Personally, there are many articles that are completely unnecessary to write, but the author happened to write them, and what he wrote did not fit the main plot. I started skipping chapters to read. Because it was annoying to read, I came here to complain about it. I hope the author will forgive me! ! !

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The writing was very good and creative at the beginning, but then it felt quite strange. I obtained items and techniques from another world, and then used them in Douluo. The logic and cheating were quite appropriate. I should write less about other worlds and delve more deeply into the Douluo world. I can develop slowly, then build up a power, compete with Tang San, and become a micro-manipulation master. I feel that there is a lot to do, and there should be a lot of content to write about. The various different world plots that follow are more confusing. They are all based on the name Douluo. This is purely a personal opinion.

Lin Yi traveled across the Douluo Continent just by reading a fan's complaint. The whims and wonderful ideas in it are not common to outsiders, but now that he is here, he must not let him down.

No matter how it is written, just because the protagonist is Shan Wuhun Lan Yincao, this will give you a good review

Lin Yi's grandparents are a bit funny. There is no talk of love or anything, they are just interested in sex, but that's fine, whether you like them or not is secondary.

Starting from the clone soul skill, it becomes a bit boring later on. At least Shi Hao's freedom of transformation is a means to increase his strength. I won't describe all the soul skills later. Show me how to fall asleep. I hope this world no longer has the god-damn ability of clones. Amen

The writing is okay, but it's a bit messy, which is a common problem for newcomers, but newcomers can understand it. Come on.