All Heavens Creature Cards

The book's ideas are okay, but it hurts to see this stubborn country not developing its own power. Can't the price and attributes be written in more detail? Can the description of the characters be more detailed? Everyone has the same name, no description at all, a bit dry

The subject matter of the novel is okay, I give it three stars, but the author's choice of words and sentences is really not good. In many places, the preface does not match the follower, and it looks really tiring. This is no longer something that a novice can explain. It is either a purely AI-generated novel, or it can only be said that the author did not pass the Chinese language in elementary school.

A suggestion to the author, if you can't grasp the family plot, just go straight to the orphanage. Also check more, there are a lot of typos and bugs, forget the typos and you still need to learn skills when your skill bar is full.

How many of them are disgusted and abandoned by naughty children? They are not outstanding in the first place, but they still disgust readers.

From the perspective of ordinary people, the government and other organizations work together to conceal important matters related to the interests of ordinary people without considering the interests of ordinary people. If I were an ordinary person, the government would be my enemy. Why does such an official exist if it does not serve the people? It is not an exaggeration to say that he is a big thief. Since all the troubles caused by this can be attributed to the official, the official is the biggest enemy of ordinary people.

It was too poisonous, and he was poisoned to death in the end.

This official website is really rubbish, it's so stupid that it can lead to death.

The author has written eight books, and this writing style is nothing like it. . .

I haven't finished it yet, but overall I can barely watch it and there are a lot of bad points. Then I may have read it roughly in the later stage, and there may be some omissions. Maybe the authors I mentioned below have written about it and I have read it. But there is a high probability that there is none, except for the nest, which will be patched later. I don't know if there are restrictions, saying that you can't write about patriotism and peace. In fact, the protagonist can be said to be invincible from the sixth level, but the protagonist has not completely eliminated those who are hostile to him until the eighth level. Then the article kept writing about various general things. No, since you are invincible and don't care about so-called foreign things, you can still seal the card in a separate place after reaching the eighth level. Major dungeons in major cities around the world. Do you need to waste a lot of your time by sealing one card? It's true that some of the protagonist's actions are hard to understand. You can say that the Holy Mother is not your fault. It doesn't count as decisive in killing, it's just very contradictory. Including the so-called soft knife that has been written in the article. Just arrange some handsome men and beautiful women or... Around the protagonist and his family. Various detours to plot against the protagonist. Since what you wrote in the article is that you don't like it, and it's not the kind of harem article you wrote, then you should just reject it. Your strength is sitting there, so what are you afraid of? I have been writing about respecting strength, but as soon as it comes to reality and becomes relevant to the country and family, it wilts. Before the lair card appeared, I had been wondering whether I could create artificial combinations, because you can add weapons, armor, etc. To human cards, and legion cards are based on the first one of the seals, and later cards can be directly assigned to others of the same level. Moreover, the so-called biochemical human clones have come out later, so wouldn't it be good to create related low-level Niu 13 creatures by yourself for upgrading? Or, if none of these things work, then before sealing it into a legion card, give him something to improve his attributes, because it will be closer to the first one anyway. When I was able to seal the lair, I kept thinking, why not build the lair and then seal the cards that come out of the lair? Then I had this question until the protagonist reached the eighth level, and was told that it didn't work after trying it, and it was obviously a patch. And the article mentions that there are upgrade props, and the protagonist can only seal lower-level lair cards. There is no relevant operation in the article. In the early stages, I remember mentioning that the two talents obtained by the protagonist were actually increased by so-called props. The biggest cheat in the article, to put it bluntly, isn't it talent? Since props can be obtained, shouldn't the protagonist find ways to obtain more props that increase his talents? Then that evil organization has such awesome stuff. You can add a sacrificial talent thing. Why not search for this organization when you are invincible in the later stage? And I don't think this talent should be called sacrifice. You should call it extreme upgrade. The sacrifice I understand is that you sacrifice at will, and you can harvest all kinds of things, instead of just upgrading the item level, and you can't cross the level. And while new functions are constantly appearing in the creation of the first talent card, sacrifice has always been one function.

I feel like it's not as good as the previous novels. The protagonist is a bit of a virgin and a bit too soft, which many people have picked on. Also, the people in it and the official settings are a bit nonsense. Compared with the previous novels, it doesn't feel like it was written by one person.