Douluo: Sword Immortal from Another World

The author's mentality needs to change slowly. The protagonist's mentality changes from a modern social animal to one who awakens his soul and wants to be a gangster. Later, he discovers that the master does not actually care whether he is alive or not to fight for opportunities for himself. The mentality will change later. Please read on. The main reason is that the author's writing is not clear enough in character portrayal. Let's make progress together.

It can be seen that the author wants to write a book strictly according to Dou Yi's settings, but to be honest, after reading so many Douluo movies, these settings are already very confusing. It is difficult to like if you write completely according to Dou Yi's settings. Just like my impression of the setting of absorbing soul bones is that there are steps to destroy one's own bones, so I was confused when you wrote that the protagonist can easily absorb a hundred thousand year soul bone, but you did give an explanation.

Like Teddy, he goes around messing with women.

I think first of all, the protagonist has problems as a human being. He is born with level 3 soul power and is certain to become a soul master, but among soul masters it is a low-level ordinary talent. Since those who mentioned awakening martial souls are given ordinary meditation methods, Yu Xiaogang is given advanced ones that can increase the cultivation speed by 50%. When no one gives you a chance, someone gives it to you. You can despise him personally, but you can't If you don't recognize or be grateful, you will look down upon anything Yu Xiaogang says or does. These are not what you should think about, right? First of all, no one is perfect, and there are people you look down upon in every world. As long as you are not at the top of the world, who is not looking at a lot of problems with a magnifying glass, what other people are like has nothing to do with you. You think you are just being clever and feel at ease. There is something wrong with your life. Let's talk about the setting issue. If you talk about your talent in front of Tang San, Tang San will give you all the notes on the fairy grass. Tang San didn't even know if it existed in this world. He didn't know it existed until he saw the fairy grass. No matter what Tang San said, he didn't have this motive. It was inexplicable. There was also the saying that Tang San was double-standard. Double-standard is not a derogatory term. You can talk about what he didn't do well. What's the meaning of emphasizing double-standard? I'll ask. The simplest question is, how many people can help relatives or not? In the end, it is all about helping relatives and not helping parents. If you look at the problem from a God's perspective, can you also have a God's perspective in life? You can say that he is wrong in theory, but the principle itself is a product of rationality. Otherwise, only you will recognize this truth and others will not. Local remarks cannot be called truth, and they can only be called your personal thoughts. Including the eight-level attempt to steal the Blue Silver Emperor's leg bone. I just want to say that when Tang San faced the momentum of the waterfall, even if he didn't use his soul power, he was over forty at that time. He couldn't stand at that time. You, an eighth-level soul power person, can't stand under the impact of the waterfall. Kuang stopped looking for a mechanism at the waterfall, but it couldn't be realized. He planned to replace Tang San and find Dugu Bo. This kind of cleverness is too natural. Gee, I just want to say one thing. This protagonist is too much like the young master from a small place in some villains, who is killed by the protagonist alone.

Don't treat powerful people as good people. Good people cannot be the masters of powerful forces. The protagonist should be given a wisdom halo at the beginning. And then there is being studied. Your initial stuff belongs to others. The results were concealed. What about late exposure? Planning the old poison ambrosia. What makes you think you won't be punished by death? Can the Qibao Glazed Sect keep it a secret? If there is something about the evolution of the martial soul, it can solve the problems in the old poisonous family. Why don't you die? Innate level three. Be studied. Does Tang Hao know? If you know, you will die too. Immortal grass or soul bone. Don't say you stole his wife's. Even if you gain something else, you will still die. Wouldn't it be better to give him a son than to keep him? A bunch of taken-for-granted operations.

Don't collapse, don't panic, don't be lazy, don't ramble,

My opinion is that you have to understand the double standards and serving the bowl while eating and putting the bowl down and scolding the mother.

Showing kindness is licking, don't make any sense to me, saying "good things about Wuhun Palace" in your mouth, but secretly licking Tang San and the jade vat, this is even more disgusting.

Not just anyone can absorb such a high-level soul ring. Does the author treat those forces in the mainland as idiots? Tang San was able to absorb it because he had been exercising since he was a child. The physical strength was good, and weight-bearing training still had some benefits for the body. Although the master had problems with his character, it was undeniable that he still had something in this aspect of knowledge, no matter how he learned it. Another point is that the protagonist written by the author also has double standards and is a bit self-righteous. The first time he absorbed the soul ring, he was a little embarrassed and insulted the mistress and the two of them. Even if you write that the protagonist shows a trace of disdain in his eyes, it is relatively normal.

That's not right, author, don't you think the title above says it's Wuhundian's position? Why do you worship Chenxin as your teacher?