Part-time Scientist

I feel that this book should be okay, and the content is also very interesting. The single female protagonist is well portrayed. This book should be regarded as a fairy tale for some book friends who like single female protagonists. (I am also a single heroine, and I loyally support it)

Just a Qiong Yao style narrative has poisoned a lot of people. It's not easy for me to persist. I personally feel that there are too many love lines. First, it doesn't reflect much of the importance of the system and how much the ability has improved. Second, the protagonist's family is so beautiful and has a sense of presence. The protagonist's efforts seem to be just for his girlfriend, and making money is also for his girlfriend. It's a bit slutty! ! ! Well, in short, it feels like I saw the college entrance examination, and all the stories are written around my girlfriend! ! ! Here's the main line! ! ! Where is the main line! !

I have read the entire book. The author's creativity is very good. Although it is unreasonable, it is interesting. Give it 5 points for creativity. In terms of emotional scenes, the single female protagonist is very good, but it can be seen that the author is not good at emotional scenes. Every emotional scene looks extremely embarrassing, so I give it a score for emotional scenes. As for the focus of this book, which is scientific research, it is generally boring and ignorant. It can be seen that the author is not someone who knows a lot about high and new technologies, and has not read the information in this area. He can only write about some common cognitions that ordinary people have. First of all, he does not understand the value of these new technologies. The plot description of the research and development of these technologies is too bland and weak, which does not give people a sense of excitement and leaves readers with no sense of involvement. I'd give it a 3 for scientific research plot. Generally speaking, the emotional drama is skipped, the readability is okay, and it is suitable for readers who are new to science and technology literature.

How should I put it, the story is good, but the writing style is really not that good. I actually read a lot of it, and finally couldn't stand it anymore.

What did you write? Haha

A little bit of water, a running account ! ! ! ! It feels so raw

I just can't understand it, it feels a bit esoteric

After reading a few chapters, I felt like I was reading an essay written by an ordinary middle school student. If online novels want to keep readers reading, (except for writers with strong writing skills) they should mainly focus on describing the plot. There can be some description in the middle, but the description is to portray the characters and promote the plot, rather than rhetoric for the sake of rhetoric like middle school students writing essays, and detailed writing everywhere to make up the number of words. How should I put it? It's too bland to be cool, and the writing could be more concise. There is no foreshadowing, and the emotional line is rather strange. Things that have nothing to do with the plot will appear redundant if they are not controlled by writing skills.

A running account. . . . . . . . . . . . .

After watching it for 90 minutes, I couldn't stand it anymore. The writing is stiff and awkward, or the story is good, but it's stiff and awkward and makes it hard to read. Seeing that both of them have finished their military training, well, I wish you good luck!