Saved Ji Xiaofu at the Beginning

Saved Ji Xiaofu at the Beginning

by Biye Hengxiao

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About This Novel

Qin Yitian accidentally traveled to the golden world of martial arts. With the help of three system cards, in the turbulent rivers and lakes, in the world of beauties, he gradually grew into a top master...

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A Drop of Water55mo ago

The article is okay

The article is about a martial arts gathering. My impressions after watching it are that there are many shortcomings in the writing and many plots. It could have simply completed a story. For example, if you kill Yi Zhiping, you will be done with it. Just don't do it. I always want to get entangled in the story. People watch it and wonder, what is the protagonist going to do? I feel like what the protagonist wants to do when he walks around the world. Sometimes, you have to take care of things that have nothing to do with you. Originally weak, he still had to light fires everywhere. Feeling very sick. Don't do it if you want, just do it cleanly. For example, Jiang Yulang. It must be consistent with the practices of Jianghu. Overall, it feels like an average writer

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Bai Xiaokuangfan61mo ago

Don't be a eunuch, don't give up.

Do you book friends have any recommendations for martial arts fusion world novels of the same type?

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空格23155mo ago

Off track

A good martial arts world requires teleportation cards and character cards

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Smile.24455mo ago

The protagonist has never read martial arts novels or watched martial arts TV series

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Drawing Sand with Hand56mo ago

The article is not on topic

It's obvious that Ji Xiaofu is a lover of heaven, why did you write "The Eight Parts of the Dragon"?

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The Avenue of Nothingness56mo ago

Not so good

It feels so messed up that I can't stand it anymore

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Diku. Ea60mo ago

cut

Not bad, but it's a pity that the author was reincarnated for the sake of heaven and man! Decisive enough! ! !

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Creation Brilliant61mo ago

come on

Uh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh

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