Signed at the Base for Three Years and Became the Father of Global Special Forces

At first it was said that the squad leader hadn't been home for several years, and then the squad leader's wife gave birth and was pregnant for ten months. She was still pregnant for ten months without going home. Think about it carefully.

The whole article is very good, but there are some places that cannot be explained. For example, Lao Ban in the first chapter has not taken a vacation for two years but his wife is still pregnant. This is a bit strange. The description of Sister Yang can also tell that Sister Yang is not that kind of person... I saw in a comment that this article is about a new world and a new innovation, but when I read the back part, it was basically the same as the plot of Special Forces II, except that the name and title were changed. I don't know if my understanding is correct, but the whole article is good. It's rare to see new innovations in military zones. New novels are generally good. Come on, author! 👏👏👏

Anyway, the book is good-looking and very provocative, but Zhao Bing should just hold it down! And some readers. Book reviews are about books. Some readers are serious about it and even post selfies. How come no one knows you in reality? You want people to know you in book reviews. You make it look like you are selling it. The truth is that you are convinced and the management ignores you. It is getting more and more outrageous. If you want to buy something, go to the red light district! There are people out there who want to know you and pollute the Shuping review area.

The overall feeling of this book is quite good, but one thing you need to pay attention to is that the plot behind you is basically sensational every few chapters. Proper sensationalism can bring readers into the storyline, but excessive sensationalism can seem a bit boring, and there are indeed a lot of sensational scenes in the later chapters. And the author is great, this book should have a single female protagonist, right? Do you want to reveal the plot appropriately? I won't tell anyone else! ! !

But when it comes to Chapter 47, be careful. The protagonist must be ruthless to look good and decisive. Remember not to ruin the image of a soldier, otherwise I will come to criticize you every day.

If possible, I advise you to rewrite it and erase the shortcomings. Erase the shortcomings. Your book will be a masterpiece. It doesn't matter how small the word count is. When you write this book, you are creating a virtual world. You have to keep polishing and refining it. Your book has such potential, otherwise I wouldn't waste my time writing this review. But now it's just potential~ If you don't refine it, it will still be third-rate, not even top-notch. If you look back, you will see that there are many things that you take for granted. You need to have some basis. Chapter 10 or 9, a corpse with a dagger pierced through the neck. You didn't describe it clearly, but a special soldier said he had chest injuries. What's your reasoning? ? ?

Is this the free thing you said?

After reading the introduction, I thought that three years of signing had already passed. I didn't expect that the first chapter had just been obtained. Alas, the writing was still very exaggerated. But even though it was exaggerated, when I regarded myself as the protagonist, I couldn't help but shed tears.

Are there any book friends who have read for 8500+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

Parts of your book are very similar to another book on Special Forces! For example, the red-eyed soldier here is exactly the same as the other one! It's just that the protagonist has changed! And the same goes for the heroine! The heroine's background can be said to be the same in both books!