The Supreme Master of Time Travel

I have only read a few chapters of this book. The first thing is that the writing is okay. Furthermore, the protagonist's IQ is relatively online. But there is one thing: there are too many narrations and it is very wordy. Also, the realm is not clearly marked, and the entire joint is very vague. Things like realm should be written down from the very beginning. But after watching a few pictures, I couldn't stand it anymore. Because I saw the protagonist wondering why he had always had everything going smoothly, and then when he was confused, he quickly discovered the clue. I don't want to read it anymore. To be honest, the author's writing style is more than enough to write a simple piece of writing, but you have to write such a high-level thing. It really embarrasses me to engage in conspiracy theories. At the beginning, you didn't explain anything clearly. You didn't have an intuitive representation of the realm of cultivation or the level of the protagonist, and then you started to play conspiracy theories. This was very confusing to me. You need to know what our readers want to see. First of all, the title of your book, The Supreme Master, sounds like a standard novice fantasy novel. What kind of lofty conspiracy theory are you talking about? Isn't this intoxicating? In fact, we just want to read a cool article with online writing skills and online IQ. Why. Not pleasant at all. I didn't even have to watch the rest of the plot, I knew it would be unpleasant. Can't we just write a story about a little guy who is promoted step by step and finally reaches the top? So unhappy. The most important thing is, oh my god, you didn't even give me a golden finger or write us down clearly what it is. You have written several chapters, and we don't even know what Goldfinger is. It really makes me drunk. What exactly is the Intelligent Brain System? And that one at the very beginning, oh my god, that one at the very beginning can be deleted directly, it's all nonsense. With your writing skills, it's really difficult to write something in-depth and become popular. So you should write that kind of novice cool article, don't. It's too difficult to write something profound with Xiaobai's writing style. Be direct and simple, and it will be more relaxed for you, and it will be more enjoyable for us readers. Taking advantage of the fact that few people are watching and no contracts have been signed, I quickly changed the beginning. The three golden chapters are really not for nothing.

Can you write down the realm...

Zhang Ye traveled through time with the memory of a character from the Shattered Void, and he also had an awesome omnipotent system. It was amazing!

Has it been changed? .? ?