
Travel Around the World Starting from Xiaoao
by No Lights On During Power Outage
About This Novel
This is a story that begins in the world of martial arts and travels around the world...
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Official(42)Scraped 21d ago
A bunch of poison
A self-centered villain, you have simply replaced Linghu Chong's disgust. Lao Yue has never been sorry for you. He hides everything he needs to confess.
The 2nd world.
I was very speechless. Someone has been raising you for so long, and if his tmd is not what you want, you will chop him to death. I really vomited blood. What kind of perverted idea is this?
Rubbish
I just want to ask, why did Yue Buqun teach him the Zixia magic skill and why he still practiced the basic skills? He even practiced swordplay with Yue Lingshan over a cliff and knocked the sword off the cliff, which is still in the original work.
Why is it not negative? I feel like giving it one star is too high.
Anyone who can persist in watching the first world is definitely at the level of Shen Nong. I don't know if there are people who can watch the second world. This author can be called a professional in poisoning. This protagonist is really hard to describe
personal opinion
A mercenary in his thirties must have experienced individual combat in modern society. There are many methods of concealment, assassination, sneak attack and poisoning. How come he became like this after arriving in the ancient world? He was so reckless and showed no signs of intelligence. Being seriously injured and on the verge of death for the first time can be said to be an opportunity, but what about the second time? Haven't you learned any lessons? Some people will tell you that you are now a public enemy in the martial arts world, but you still show off and have no scruples. You are still in the mood to chat with others when they are setting up an ambush and waiting for reinforcements, and you still pretend to be someone who clearly does not have the strength to crush you. There are also some plot arrangements that are like a stroke of genius with no trace to be found. You can modify them later and it will be much smoother.
Qu Feiyan owes you?
Just this one look at Qu Feiyan made me abandon the book.
...
This is the path of the protagonist. There is nothing new. You should write romance novels.
Author, there's something really wrong with your plot
It used to be a bit decisive in killing, but now it has become hesitant. It just doesn't feel good anymore, you know, especially as a swordsman, who would rather bend than bend, and have an indomitable character is the best. Now you are writing a book that is wrong. The character has changed so much that it was written by another person. I really can't stand it. I read it because the protagonist is decisive and determined in killing. Now this kind of book is almost like slapping you in the face and being groveling. I can't stand it anymore. I gave up this book.
The plot of Qu Feiyan is really baffling
Is it possible to kill Fei Bin just to reveal that Fei Bin is the protagonist?
If you leave the original plot, you won't be able to write it, right?
A bunch of advanced skills actually perfectly replaced the helplessness of Linghu Chong in the original work when he was too weak. If you have to rely on the original work, the only difference between you and the original work is that the name of the protagonist is different.
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Official(42)Scraped 21d ago
A bunch of poison
A self-centered villain, you have simply replaced Linghu Chong's disgust. Lao Yue has never been sorry for you. He hides everything he needs to confess.
The 2nd world.
I was very speechless. Someone has been raising you for so long, and if his tmd is not what you want, you will chop him to death. I really vomited blood. What kind of perverted idea is this?
Rubbish
I just want to ask, why did Yue Buqun teach him the Zixia magic skill and why he still practiced the basic skills? He even practiced swordplay with Yue Lingshan over a cliff and knocked the sword off the cliff, which is still in the original work.
Why is it not negative? I feel like giving it one star is too high.
Anyone who can persist in watching the first world is definitely at the level of Shen Nong. I don't know if there are people who can watch the second world. This author can be called a professional in poisoning. This protagonist is really hard to describe
personal opinion
A mercenary in his thirties must have experienced individual combat in modern society. There are many methods of concealment, assassination, sneak attack and poisoning. How come he became like this after arriving in the ancient world? He was so reckless and showed no signs of intelligence. Being seriously injured and on the verge of death for the first time can be said to be an opportunity, but what about the second time? Haven't you learned any lessons? Some people will tell you that you are now a public enemy in the martial arts world, but you still show off and have no scruples. You are still in the mood to chat with others when they are setting up an ambush and waiting for reinforcements, and you still pretend to be someone who clearly does not have the strength to crush you. There are also some plot arrangements that are like a stroke of genius with no trace to be found. You can modify them later and it will be much smoother.
Qu Feiyan owes you?
Just this one look at Qu Feiyan made me abandon the book.
...
This is the path of the protagonist. There is nothing new. You should write romance novels.
Author, there's something really wrong with your plot
It used to be a bit decisive in killing, but now it has become hesitant. It just doesn't feel good anymore, you know, especially as a swordsman, who would rather bend than bend, and have an indomitable character is the best. Now you are writing a book that is wrong. The character has changed so much that it was written by another person. I really can't stand it. I read it because the protagonist is decisive and determined in killing. Now this kind of book is almost like slapping you in the face and being groveling. I can't stand it anymore. I gave up this book.
The plot of Qu Feiyan is really baffling
Is it possible to kill Fei Bin just to reveal that Fei Bin is the protagonist?
If you leave the original plot, you won't be able to write it, right?
A bunch of advanced skills actually perfectly replaced the helplessness of Linghu Chong in the original work when he was too weak. If you have to rely on the original work, the only difference between you and the original work is that the name of the protagonist is different.
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I have read a lot of astronomy, and this book by the author is quite good. Although I am a novice and there are flaws, I can still tell that the author writes with great care. I hope that the author will stick to his own writing ideas and rhythm, write what he wants to write, and use the readers' opinions as a reference. Three-dimensional characters, exciting plot, and unique language




I've finished reading The Swordsman, and I think it's pretty good. I haven't read the rest of it!













