Young Hero, Please Have Mercy

After reading more than 500 chapters, I finally understand what the protagonist's biggest trump card is. It turns out to be that mouth. In front of the protagonist's mouth, any danger will disappear! Let's take a closer look at how many difficulties the protagonist has solved with this mouth! He is actually the talkative protagonist! With one mouth, the sun, the earth, the air! To be honest, author, your martial arts novel lacks a little bit of the martial arts flavor! You can learn from those battle scenes in "The Rain and the Clouds". If you're not good at writing, you have to learn from them, don't you think? This battle scene of yours is not interesting at all, and I have never seen the protagonist's windstorm and magic light used in battle. I don't think these are the things you should write about for him if you think of them. If you can't think of it, don't write it, right? There is also a star bridge realm. It is actually crowded with heavenly stars and earth spirits. Everyone else is on the same list and in the same realm, but you are better off. Having squeezed into two lists in one realm, do you find that the protagonist can no longer protect you? So we have to quickly adjust the realm so that the protagonist can hold on? I really admire you, you are willing to lower this realm list for him. Nor is he willing to improve the protagonist's strength! I'm confused. What's the point of trying to suppress the protagonist's realm? And your strength system is completely full of loopholes! It takes five years to take a medicine and break through to the first level. You are completely slapping yourself in the face, and you are slapping yourself in the face so hard. If it is so difficult for a star bridge to break through the aiki, doesn't it mean that it will take ten years to break through to the first level? Can't you write it as you did when you first started writing? Did you switch to another writer? Has the author been changed**? And completely trampling on your previous settings, reaching the second level of Xingqiao at the peak of zhenqi, how many cards do you think you lost? At least there are hundreds of them, right? Don't tell me that your book Xingqiao Nine Levels has just begun to end, and that the protagonist of the Rain-covering Sword Technique and Heavenly Sword Ninth World Immortality Technique actually didn't practice it. Which one of these is not better than the martial arts you set? Now the protagonist can change to five-star skills, right? The protagonist has mastered the four-star technique, can he change to the five-star technique? Why haven't you changed it yet? If you have the secret of longevity, why don't you change it? Are you trampling on our intelligence? How about adding a setting that can convert the protagonist's four-star skills experience into five-star skills, directly reaching the realm of Xiaocheng?

There were some bad reviews for this book and I deleted them, but I am not disrespecting you by any means. I am grateful to everyone who subscribes to this book and puts forward opinions. I just cannot afford to hurt the author, but please believe that I will remember your opinions and work hard to correct and improve myself! Thank you to all the book friends. I am very happy that the book friends who have left have been here. I am also grateful to the book friends who are still here and are patient with me. Thank you all!

I liked it as much as I liked it, half-heartedly. I really wanted to vomit when I read it. When I saw a pretty girl saying she had no idea but touching others and flirting with others, I, a man, felt like vomiting. The emotional drama became the biggest flaw of this book.

My head will be chopped off for you. . . . . . . . .

In fact, I personally think the content of the article is pretty good. But about this golden finger, it's really too low! For other protagonists, Goldfinger kills people and completes tasks to lose experience, and then exchanges the experience for martial arts, upgrades, and improves the martial arts level. This book is just the opposite! No experience will be given for killing people, and no tasks will be given. Experience will be given if you take the initiative to improve the martial arts level, and experience will be given if you take the initiative to break through the martial arts level. However, experience can only be obtained by growing medicine and learning martial arts. Here's the question, if I can break through levels and martial arts levels so easily, why do I need your experience? No matter how much martial arts you learn, it will be in vain if you don't have a big breakthrough in your strength.

I hope the author will not let the protagonist join any imperial organization. Now if you are weak, you can join, but if you are strong, it feels disgusting to stay there. Every time I see a novel in which the protagonist joins the imperial court, I don't want to read it.

In the previous book, Shi Xiaole had a clear purpose to advance the main plot and branch plots, but as of now, the main plot of the protagonist is always related to women, just like the plot cannot be advanced without women.

I won't give the star. This book is not to my taste.

The content is not good. It is neither heroic nor weird to write about this kind of martial arts arena, so it is not interesting.

I guessed the plot, I knew I was going to do it with the Dongfang Family, but you really didn't give the protagonist any cards, I'm really angry! Why is this golden finger so useless! This is the first time I've seen such rubbish Goldfinger!