
The Adopted Sister is the Leader of the Demon Cult
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I, An Lingyun, the current leader of the Demon Cult, was accidentally attacked by thieves, my skills backfired, and my body turned into the appearance of a five-year-old. By chance, I was rescued by a chivalrous man named Zhuo Yang. Later, relying on the convenience of his skills, An Lingyun began to open his vest randomly. Five-year-old An Lingyun (innocent): Brother Zhuoyang, I want to eat candied haws. Zhuo Yang (Pampering): OK, buy it. Eighteen-year-old An Lingyun (coquettish and shy): Mr. Zhuo, can you accompany me to enjoy the flowers today? Zhuo Yang (euphemistically): Uh, no, I have to pick up my sister from school. Twenty-eight-year-old An Lingyun (mature and charming): Brother, the moon is so beautiful tonight. Do you want to watch the moon, drink and have fun with me and my sister? Zhuo Yang (speaking righteously): No, my sister gets hungry easily at night, so I have to go back and make her a midnight snack. An Lingyun (angry): I have so many vests! Why do you care about the youngest one?
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At seven years old, you enter primary school. On the day you enter school, you are bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. At thirteen years old, you are at the peak of your sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the air of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong people in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school strong people, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips! So scary. So you make up your mind to enter junior high school. At the age of sixteen, you have reached the state of junior high school, through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In the ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful and obtain the great path. But in the current world trend, where the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin, it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year contract with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. The heart of the house is roaring and roaring. The veins on your hands are popping up. When I come back, I will dye the sky with demon blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big boss. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to Shanghai to Shenzhen, I have seen strong people working hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the guidance of a mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from university. They all become your strength to move forward. Three years later, everything was calm and peaceful at the woman's home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she had refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's expression changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the final analysis it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is real, but this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. A man's voice sounded. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously where the mansion was. On the same day, in the magical city of Taiyi Xianfu (urban area), the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame to prepare for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man named Ma wearing glasses rode a penguin to visit. After some pleasantries, you are invited to enter the new map Zhengdao Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as you enter, you find that there are about dozens of people present, and their strength is unfathomable. Among them, you can hear that I have no interest in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn one hundred million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned for a while. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago
The author must be face blind. So I think readers are also ignorant.
I'll just say a little
The deviation from the main line is too serious. I am either opening a dungeon or on the way to open a dungeon, and the updates are slow and the number of words is small. The last time I read it was more than a month ago, and there were only a few more chapters. I waited for you for a month and it was over in less than half a day. The plot writing is becoming more and more useless. At the beginning, I could still see you on the first, second, and third lists. What are you writing now? Tell me what this piece of shit you wrote is?
The heroine is selfish and greedy, which makes me sick.
The heroine is not really only five years old. She uses her status as a child to drink all the wine from the protagonist. Just because the wine is useful for her own injuries, she doesn't leave any for the protagonist. It is said that the protagonist will be his subordinate sooner or later, and his things belong to him. Hypocritical and disgusting.
The book collapsed
The beginning is okay, you can read it in Shuhuang. But the more I write later, the worse it gets. Let's talk about a few bad points. 1. The protagonist has a system, and he can gradually become invincible by relying on system tasks. However, there is a bottleneck when he breaks through to the Grand Master. He says he must defeat the disgusting villain princess, and he is manipulated by the villain princess. 2. The Luowen Zhao Gao and others summoned by the system are not completely loyal to the protagonist. They have their own thoughts and can betray the protagonist. It is outrageous. In this case, it is better to not receive the reward but to choose all the subordinates who have improved their strength. 3. This book is completely off topic. It is said that it is a escort agency. Now it is always opening the same copy. After finishing one arena, it will enter the next arena. It is always competing for the first place in various competitions.
To be honest, it's okay to write about children, but I can't read it after I transformed.
The author made all the mistakes he could have made. He deviated from the main line and opened dungeons like crazy. And that person named Mei, why didn't you kill her? It's just because she's a woman. If she were a man, I'd say directly, I will never accept threats from others.
generally
General, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general
If you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't forcefully write them.
When I watched it, both the plot and the writing were okay. But when it comes to the emotional line with the heroine, it always becomes inexplicably stiff and awkward. Whether it is the interaction with the five-year-old heroine or the so-called "fate" with the eighteen-year-old heroine, people can't help but dig their toes to the ground. Also, the way the heroine got along with the protagonist when she turned into a five-year-old child did not let the readers know at all that she was the so-called leader of the demon sect. With decades of experience, I could not see the magnanimity of the leader as a great master. But the strange thing is that the other characters are well written and portrayed. I can only think that the author overwrote the emotional line. Summary: This is a young author with little social experience who wants to try his best to write a story with high plot and emotion, but the writing is not enough.
generally
It's a martial arts detective genre, but it has nothing to do with my sister.
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Official(80)Scraped 11d ago
At seven years old, you enter primary school. On the day you enter school, you are bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. At thirteen years old, you are at the peak of your sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the air of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong people in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school strong people, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips! So scary. So you make up your mind to enter junior high school. At the age of sixteen, you have reached the state of junior high school, through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In the ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful and obtain the great path. But in the current world trend, where the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin, it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year contract with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. The heart of the house is roaring and roaring. The veins on your hands are popping up. When I come back, I will dye the sky with demon blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big boss. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to Shanghai to Shenzhen, I have seen strong people working hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the guidance of a mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from university. They all become your strength to move forward. Three years later, everything was calm and peaceful at the woman's home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she had refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's expression changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the final analysis it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is real, but this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. A man's voice sounded. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously where the mansion was. On the same day, in the magical city of Taiyi Xianfu (urban area), the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame to prepare for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man named Ma wearing glasses rode a penguin to visit. After some pleasantries, you are invited to enter the new map Zhengdao Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as you enter, you find that there are about dozens of people present, and their strength is unfathomable. Among them, you can hear that I have no interest in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn one hundred million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned for a while. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago
The author must be face blind. So I think readers are also ignorant.
I'll just say a little
The deviation from the main line is too serious. I am either opening a dungeon or on the way to open a dungeon, and the updates are slow and the number of words is small. The last time I read it was more than a month ago, and there were only a few more chapters. I waited for you for a month and it was over in less than half a day. The plot writing is becoming more and more useless. At the beginning, I could still see you on the first, second, and third lists. What are you writing now? Tell me what this piece of shit you wrote is?
The heroine is selfish and greedy, which makes me sick.
The heroine is not really only five years old. She uses her status as a child to drink all the wine from the protagonist. Just because the wine is useful for her own injuries, she doesn't leave any for the protagonist. It is said that the protagonist will be his subordinate sooner or later, and his things belong to him. Hypocritical and disgusting.
The book collapsed
The beginning is okay, you can read it in Shuhuang. But the more I write later, the worse it gets. Let's talk about a few bad points. 1. The protagonist has a system, and he can gradually become invincible by relying on system tasks. However, there is a bottleneck when he breaks through to the Grand Master. He says he must defeat the disgusting villain princess, and he is manipulated by the villain princess. 2. The Luowen Zhao Gao and others summoned by the system are not completely loyal to the protagonist. They have their own thoughts and can betray the protagonist. It is outrageous. In this case, it is better to not receive the reward but to choose all the subordinates who have improved their strength. 3. This book is completely off topic. It is said that it is a escort agency. Now it is always opening the same copy. After finishing one arena, it will enter the next arena. It is always competing for the first place in various competitions.
To be honest, it's okay to write about children, but I can't read it after I transformed.
The author made all the mistakes he could have made. He deviated from the main line and opened dungeons like crazy. And that person named Mei, why didn't you kill her? It's just because she's a woman. If she were a man, I'd say directly, I will never accept threats from others.
generally
General, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general, general
If you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't forcefully write them.
When I watched it, both the plot and the writing were okay. But when it comes to the emotional line with the heroine, it always becomes inexplicably stiff and awkward. Whether it is the interaction with the five-year-old heroine or the so-called "fate" with the eighteen-year-old heroine, people can't help but dig their toes to the ground. Also, the way the heroine got along with the protagonist when she turned into a five-year-old child did not let the readers know at all that she was the so-called leader of the demon sect. With decades of experience, I could not see the magnanimity of the leader as a great master. But the strange thing is that the other characters are well written and portrayed. I can only think that the author overwrote the emotional line. Summary: This is a young author with little social experience who wants to try his best to write a story with high plot and emotion, but the writing is not enough.
generally
It's a martial arts detective genre, but it has nothing to do with my sister.
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